Travelling is a good way to broaden people's horizon so I love to travel around my country when I have spare time.
Travel (旅行)是动词，名词的意思是旅途；a good way to do sth “是一个好方式” ；broaden horizon 开拓眼界（perspective也不算错）；
Last Friday I went to Qing Dao by train with my parents. It was the first time I took the express train which only used one day to get there.We arrived there around 6 pm in the evening and then checked in the restaurant to have dinner. The food in that restaurant was delicious. During night, we enjoyed the beautiful sight of urban scenery. What a exciting day!
express train 快车；behold 是看某人或某样东西，看风景最好用enjoy
Unfortunately, the weather was rainny on Saturday and the rain was so heavy that blocked us from going out.Therefore, we played cards in the room.
block sb from doing sth 阻碍某人做某事
It was sunny the next day so we decided to go to the beach. We had a relaxation and it was an enjoyable afternoon.
We only stayed in Qing Dao for few days but during these days we experienced a lot and saw many new things. It was an impressive journey for me!
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