英语好的进来

Question

帮我由汉语翻译成英文，谢谢了 ：我的名字叫林涛，我是一名中学生，我出生于1996年9月15日。我想和你成为笔友。我喜欢游泳，我认为游泳有利于我的健康，我同样喜欢唱歌。我对英语很感兴趣，想成为一名英语老师。我认为这个职业是十分有趣的，并且我很喜欢小孩。假如我成为了老师，我会和小朋友相处的很好，我们会成为很好的朋友。一周里面我会有1次和他们进行交流沟通，我还会帮助他们学习英语。但是现在我的英语老师说我的英语口语不好以及写作能力不强，你能给我些建议帮我提高英语吗。我希望你能有个好身体并且开心每一天。

Answer 1

My name is Lin Tao. I am a middle school student. I was born on September 15th, 1996. I want to be your penfriend( penpal). I like swimming because I think swimming is good for my health. I also like singing. I am interested in English and I want to be an English teacher in the future. I think it is an interesting job. And I like children,too. If I can be a teacher, I'm sure I will get on very well with the children and we'll be good friends,too. I will talk with them at least once in a week and I can also help them learn English. But my English teacher told me that I was weak in speaking and writing. Could you please give me some advice and help me improve my English?
I hope you kepp healthy and be happy every day.
Yours

Answer 2

这么长一篇不容易啊。。补点分吧。。。

My name is LinTao.I'm a student .I was born on September 15th,1996. It would be my pleasure to be your pen friend.
I like swimming ,as it can be good for my health. And I like singing.I'm deeply interested in English. My dream is going to be an English teacher.The profession is quite interesting ,at the same time , I like children very much. If only I could be a teacher,I can be going on well with the chirdren. We could be good friends.
We will talk once a week.I will help them learning English. However,my English is not good enough.My English teacher said my spoken English and writing are poor. Could you give me some suggestions in improving ?
Wish you be healthy and have happy days.

Answer 3

My name is LinTao, a student in middle school.I was born on September 15th,1996. I would like to be your penfriend.I like swimming ,for I think it's good for my health. And I also like singing.I'm very interested in English and I want to be an English teacher in the future.I think this job is quite interesting.Meanwhile , I love kids very much. If only I could be a teacher,I'm sure I will get on well with the chirdren, and we can be good friends.I'll spend my spare time to talk with them once a week, and help them improve English. However,my English is not good enough now.My English teacher said my spoken English and writing are poor. So it's very kind if you could give me some advice in improving my English. Thanks.
Healthy and happy everyday!
Best regards.