【求助】请帮忙把一句话翻译成英文.

Question

亲爱的招生办主任
请把你们将寄给我一个录取通知书的特快邮件的公司名称及其单号提供一下，还有查询网址。好让我查询物流跟踪的进度。谢谢

另外我朋友翻译成：
Can you send me a notice telling me tracking number?

不知是否正确。

Answer 1

Dear xxx (自己填吧，最好是对方的名字）,
I understand that you've sent out the offer letter. I appreciate if you could provide me the name of the courier, its tracking number (or reference number) and the website for tracking purpose. Thank you.

你朋友的翻译也没有不对，不过可以直接简化成Can you send me the tracking number？前提是对方知道你要的是哪个物件的单号。

Answer 2

Dear Admission Officer,

I wonder if it's possible for you to kindly send me the following information so that I could locate the express pacel you sent out:
the name of the express delivery company which is delivering my admission letter;
the tracking number of the express parcel;
the website to track express pacels.

Thanks and regards.

Answer 3

Please will you send me an admission notice of the express mail company nameand number offer, there is a query. So I can query the progress of logistics tracking.只能帮到这了