【帮忙给英语作文改错，附中文大意】

Question

【按中文的大意改。】
主要是改字词是否正确，
时态是否正确，
语句是否通顺，
标点的使用。
反正能找出来的错都找出来。
然后把哪里改了的在英语原文里打上括号修改，
然后发出来。
谢谢。

英文：
That day's weather is very good, clear and boundless sky. A city's high school has held a ten thousand meter long-distance race competition. The B high school sent TINA to attend this competition. She has self-confidently very much can win the champion. Because she is very fierce, moreover the condition is also very good.
The competition started. tina just started to occupy the leading position, she is feeling the front surface warm braw, smells in the wind colored delicate fragrance, the golden color hair is fluttering in the wind. She felt her condition are getting better and better, therefore she runs more and more quickly.
Is sudden, she threw down, moreover the knee broke. She cannot stand too sorely. She is depressed sits in ground, looks that other contestant surpasses her. By now, she had heard the familiar sound. Is she best friend C is encouraging her ball in play. She made an effort to stand. Although runs very much slowly, but she was still
insisting has run up to the end point.
The competition's result she has not attained the champion, even is first three. Because she is the human who last arrives at the end point. But she has not thought the defeat, she is not last at least. Because some contestants ran up to half to give up. C said to her that “you do are very good, I take am your friend as the
honor.”

中文大意：
那天的天气很好，晴空万里。A市的高中举办了一场万米长跑比赛。B高中派了TINA参加这次比赛。她很有自信能赢得冠军。因为她很厉害，而且状态也很好。
比赛开始了。tina刚开始就处在领先的位置，她感受着迎面的暖风，嗅着风中的花的清香，金色的头发在风中飘着。她感觉到自己的状态越来越好，所以她跑得越来越快。
突然，她摔倒了，而且膝盖破了。她太疼站不起来。她沮丧得坐在地上，看着别的选手超过她。这时，她的听到了熟悉的声音。是她最好的朋友C在鼓励她继续比赛。她使劲重新站了起来。虽然跑得很慢，但是她仍然坚持着跑到了终点。
比赛的结果她没有拿到冠军，甚至是前三名。因为她是最后一个到达终点的人。但是她自己并没有觉得失败，至少她不是最后一名。因为一些选手跑到一半就放弃了。C对她说，“你做的很好，我以是你的朋友为荣。”
【按中文的大意改。】

Answer 1

That day's weather (was) very good, (the sky was) clear and boundless. A city's high school (was holding) a ten thousand meter long-distance race competition. The B high school sent (a studendt called) TINA to (compete in this)competition. She (was confident and determined to be the champion). Because she is very fierce, moreover the condition (of that day was) also very good.
The (race) started. Tina (occupied) the leading position, she (felt the warm wind hitting her face), smelled (the delicate fragrance of the wind), the (blond) hair (fluttered) in the wind. She felt her condition (was) getting better and better, therefore she ran (faster and faster).
(In a) sudden, she fell down, moreover (her knee was badly injured). (It was too sore for her to stand straight). She (sat on the ground hopelessly), (watched other) contestant surpass her (in silence). By now, she (heard) (a) familiar sound. (It was her) best friend C(,) (who) (was) encouraging her (to carry on the race). She made an effort to stand. Although (she ran in a very slow pace), (yet) she was still insisting (on finish her race).
The competition's result (showed that)she (did) not (attain) the champion, (not)even (one of the) first three (places). (The reason was that) she (was the last competitor) (to reach) the end point. (However,) she (wasn't defeated psychologically), (at least in her mind) she (wasn't last). (That was because) some (of the) contestants ran up to (only) half (and gave up). C (congratulated her and said)“you (did very well), (I am very honoured and proud to be your friend.")

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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