英语大神来，自己写了个句子，帮忙看看有没有语法语句错误，谢谢

Question

Were it left to me to give some proposals,I would contend that some campaigns should be launched , and that each individual concerned should be educated to enhance their awareness accordingly

Answer 1

Were it left to me to give some proposals,I would contend that some campaigns should be launched , and that each individual concerned should be educated to enhance their awareness accordingly .
Were it left to me to give some proposals 虚拟语气条件句，没有问题；
I would contend that some campaigns should be launched , and that each individual concerned should be educated to enhance their awareness accordingly .
也没问题，should可以省略，句子紧凑一些。

Answer 2

为您解答
没问题，写得很好。尤其那个第二个that没忘记，很不错。

追问

谢谢您，我主要就是纠结第二个that，不知道该不该有，听了您的回答我就放心啦

追答

对的，不能省。并列宾从第二个不省

Answer 3

it doesnot seem to be balanced when_be 后面跟过去分词。

追问

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Answer 4

对的！句中包含虚拟语气的倒装！以及宾语从句第2个以that引导，that一般不省略！

Answer 5

开头 不如直接说
if i were to give
其它可以，只是有点汉语
方式思维