谁的英语比较好，帮我翻译一段话行么？？要专业的

Question

目前，世界上基本没有单独开展公务员养老保险制度改革的国家。各国都是在对整个社会保障体制或者养老保制度的改革中积极探讨公务员老保险制度的深化改革。到现在，中国公务员的养老仍是采取由财政一手包办的退休制度。因此，国家财政负担越来越大，公平与效率问题凸显，社会问题加重。而我国正处于社会主义市场经济体制改革的攻坚阶段。显然，此时此刻的公务员养老保险制度已经无法与现时的社会经济体制相适应。鉴于我国公务员这一特殊队伍的日渐庞大，公务员养老保险制度的改革势在必行。改革和完善家公务员养老保险制度，对于社会保险制度的深化改革，国民经济的健康发展和社会的长治久安都有积极的推进作用。

关键词：公务员养老保险； 调节因素； 调节方法
不要英文在线翻译，很多英文语法都不对的。。请教英语比较好的朋友了，谢谢

Answer 1

At present, there is no single basic old-age insurance system to carry out civil service reform. States are in the entire social security system or old-age insurance system reform, actively explore the old Civil Service Insurance System for deepening reform. Up to now, China's civil service pension is still single-handedly taken by the Financial retirement system. As a result, an increasing financial burden on the country, highlighted the issue of fairness and efficiency, increase social problems. And China is in the socialist market economic system reform in a critical stage. It is clear that at this time of the civil service pension insurance system has been unable to compete with the current social and economic systems to adapt. In view of the civil servants in China's growing ranks of a special, old-age insurance system for civil service reform is imperative. House civil service reform and improve the old-age insurance system for in-depth reform of the social insurance system, the health of the national economy and social development of long-term positive role in promoting.

Key words: civil service pension; conditioning factor; conditioning methods

Answer 2

用中文都不是很能理解了.. 英文翻译就....

At present, there is no single basic old-age insurance system to carry out civil service reform. States are in the entire social security system or old-age insurance system reform, actively explore the old Civil Service Insurance System for deepening reform. Up to now, China's civil service pension is still single-handedly taken by the Financial retirement system. As a result, an increasing financial burden on the country, highlighted the issue of fairness and efficiency, increase social problems. And China is in the socialist market economic system reform in a critical stage. It is clear that at this time of the civil service pension insurance system has been unable to compete with the current social and economic systems to adapt. In view of the civil servants in China's growing ranks of a special, old-age insurance system for civil service reform is imperative. House civil service reform and improve the old-age insurance system for in-depth reform of the social insurance system, the health of the national economy and social development of long-term positive role in promoting.

Key words: civil service pension; conditioning factor; conditioning methods

完全没有修改的，应该会有些不适当的翻译

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