我写的英语作文请帮我看下有没有语法错误请帮忙改正谢谢
if there are any（这句话写得很牵强，不过没有语法错误）. A bright future is waiting for us when all the measures are taken seriously implementation.(最后一句有点问题。从中文理解应该是：所有的措施被采取严格的执行。实际上ARE TAKEN在这里是被动了，后面SERIOUSLY修饰taken还是可以理解，至于...
我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好
第一，语法错误 prefer to + sth\/doing sth， 所以应该是 I prefer to joining in the English corner and watching English movies.参加活动，一般要加介词in，所以join in your activities for i will have less homework than that i have now.z这一句than前后结构一样，要用省略，所以改成for ...
英语高手帮帮忙,帮我看下我的这篇英语作文通不通顺,有无病句,感激不尽...
1、It goes without saying that 要改为：There is no doubt that 或者It is of no doubt that...2、virtue,social gathering,communication and the abilities to deal with all kinds of problems. 这里有逻辑错误，首先and连接的必须是同类事物。但是道德、聚会、交流、解决问题的能力，很明显不是...
求帮忙找这篇初一英语作文里的语法错误。谢谢了!!
首先，第一段里写Tom's home is in xxx. 一般说Tom lives in xxx.不能算得上错误，但是感觉很怪。第二句中now要放在末尾，这是语法问题 第三句he on a vacation缺少be动词 然后第二第三句之间缺少逻辑，最好加个because 接着，第二段里面不能说and on the train.这种说法是错的。上两句最...
帮忙看看我写的一篇英语作文,看看有没有什么错误?
那个~逻辑关系最好在紧密一点，因果关系什么的再强烈一点。比如说多用点连接词，像什么as a result of, for example, from my perspective, as far as i am concerned, 之类的恩~顺便说一下，写作文的话，用一些从句会更能丰富你想表达的意思……单词什么的最好在多样化一点~不能说要表达污染的...
帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误
每句都认真看了，我从语法和语言习惯两个方面给你进行了修改，希望及时采纳。My mother has been doing a lot of things for me不符合语言逻辑，改为过去式即可。most importance humans改为most important people in my life.英语中基本不会用in my heart这样的短语，它和中文不一样。she is ...
一篇初三的英语作为,请帮忙评判一下
the air become better and better so that we have a more healthy body.有条理，清晰 In a word,we have only one earth we should do everything to protect it,or we will regret 观点明确，结尾点题 这篇作文很好，优点都写了，语句，内容都很好，这样的作文通常在14分以上判分（初中）...
请大家帮忙修改一下英语作文吧,谢谢啦
如果你要用原句 reasonable要用副词）。 .In summation, failure is a double-edged sword , if you defeat and make the most use of it， you will become more excellent，or a losser you will be.(原文中语法没有错误，只不过我觉得逻辑上有点别扭）个人意见，仅供参考，希望对你有帮助。
初中英语作文,求老师看一下哪里有错误好吗?可单击图片查看原图!谢谢...
1、第二行use改为using（动词不能作主语，要改为动名词）2、第三行应是students' spoken English（复数所有格），同时第四行的their应该省去（因为前面的students'是可以修饰到listening skill的）3、第六行左边应是what you are saying（从句里要用陈述语序而不是are you. 你结尾处的what he is ...
这篇英语作文有什么语法错误?
a police called us to go to the police station to get purse.I looked and sure(改为was sured) this is (改为was)my purse.Thank goodness!I really thanked the police and picked up my purse person.(最后一句话改为I really thanked the police because they picked up my purse.)...
