一篇英语翻译，帮我看看翻的对不对，指出错误，谢谢

Question

Chinese is a language used by all Chinese enthnicgroups and it is also one of the countries with the highest development leveland a longest history.Whether in the past or at present,Chinese language has agreat influence at home and abroad and has a very important status.Chinesefever appears in the current world,one reason of which is that Chinese nation has a longhistory,a brilliant culture and made a great contribution to the progress of human；moreover,inthe past 30 years,Chinese has taken reform and opening-up to improve overallnational strength a lot.There are more and more countries,international groups andpeople contacted with China and interested in Chinese culture.Learning Chineselanguage has become a necessary road to understand china more.

Answer 1

总体上翻译出了原文的意思， 但是太过局限于原文,显得表达不够简练。个别单词写错了，民族--ethnic groups。 用了太多的并列句，可以考虑使句型更多样化,句子结构更简练。 以第一句为例：如果我翻的话，Chinese, used by all ethnic groups in china, is one of the languages with long history and highest level of development.

Answer 2

请参考：
Chinese is common language used by all the Chinese nationalities, which is the world’s most highly developed languages with the longest history. Whether in the past or at present, Chinese has had great influence both at home and abroad and occupied a prominent position. The current worldwide interest in learning Chinese is attributed to the long history of the Chinese nation, its glorious and magnificent culture and its tremendous contribution to human progress; more importantly, as China's overall national strength has grown in the course of reform and opening-up over the last 30 years, more and more countries, international organizations and people have interest in Chinese culture and they come into to contact with China. For them, learning Chinese has become the only road to understand China deeply.

追问

。。。能不能在我原来的翻译中挑出问题呢？英语也好，中文也好，每个人的说话方式都不同，不可能去让某个人强制去模仿另一个人说话方式，使用的词，但有一个目的是相同的，语法必须无误
这篇东西，我也有标准答案，但我从不去看的，因为学不来，而且也未必对

追答

按照你写的改了改，如下：
Chinese language is used by all Chinese ethnic groups and it is also one of the languages with the development of the highest level and a longest history. Whether in the past or at present, Chinese language has a great influence at home and abroad and has a very important status. Chinese fever appears in the current world, one reason is that Chinese nation has a long history and brilliant culture which made great contribution to the progress of humanity; moreover, in the past 30 years, with the implement of Chines reform and opening-up policies and the great improvement of comprehensive national strength,there are more and more countries, international groups and people contacted with China and have interest in Chinese culture. Learning Chinese language has become a necessary road to understand China more.

Answer 3

第一句，各民族你用races就行，别用group，让人看不懂。第二句，你的翻译把意思都改变了，中文是说发展水平最高的语言之一，你的英文主语变成了country。
Chinesefever应该写成Chinese-fever；Chinese nation 你就直接写成China不就完了？后面有点看不下去了，但语法基本正确。恕我直言，这篇翻译有点糟糕，用语十分生硬，很多地方不符合英文用语习惯,尤其字对字翻译是大忌。以下是我的翻译，水平不高，供你参考：
Madrin is spoken by all races in China, which is also one of the most advanced languages in the world. No matter in the past or in nowdays, Madrin shows big influence to the world with its important status.Now, more people from all over the world are fond of learning Madrin, through which, they can understand more about the long period Chines history, the fantastic culture and the huge contribution to the world as well. Besides, the sucessful opening reform which has been lasted for 30 years, and much stronger nation power attract more and more people, countries, and international institution to comunicate and get to konw China.Studying Chinese is a must way for them to understand China profoundly.