帮忙看英语翻译的对不对。。

Question

在这里我想向志愿者和士兵做出的巨大努力表示我的感谢。
Here ,I wish to volumteer and soldiers express my thanks for the great efforts.

Answer 1

Here, I want to say thank you to the volumteers and soldiers for the great efforts.

追问

就用wish，我想知道volumteer and soldiers ，加的对不对。。其他我抄的书。。

追答

好吧，按你的要求Here, I wish to express my thanks to the volumteers and soldiers for the great efforts.

Answer 2

对的，大部分对，英语有很多理解滴。。。

Answer 3

…wish to express my thanks to the volunteers and soldiers for the great efforts.望采纳

Answer 4

Here ,I am delighted to express my gratitude to volumteers and soldiers for the great contributions they have so far made.

Answer 5

Here, I want to thank great efforts that volunteers and soldiers have made.
问题里给的翻译处处不通啊~~