英语高手请帮我翻译成英文!

Question

我的名字是李明辉,来自于中国,男.1983年出生.从2003年至2007年,就读于南华大学生命科学与技术学院,专业

是生物技术,毕业后取得理学学士学位.2007年7月毕业后开始创业,2008年3月深刻感受到深造的必要性.

我想学习更多知识.对我来说,韩国是我最好的选择,可以学习韩语和英语,了解更多的东西.韩国拥有一流的教

育模式,一流的师资力量,友好的人民,优秀的教师,这些都深深的吸引着我.我希望能在所研究的领域里学到更

多的知识!

韩语是我首先要解决的问题,这是一个挑战,但我有信心快速的融入韩国的学习生活而不会花太多的时间,毕竟

这是日常生活的一部分.

在学习生涯中,我会尽我所能,认真掌握知识,扩大知识面.当我完成我的研究,我将继续深造,争取在韩国再取得

博士学位.

我会尽快融入韩国文化,认真学习,恳请您批准我的申请,我希望您能提供一个在韩国深造的机会!谢谢

Answer 1

My name is Li Minghui, from Yu Zhongguo, male .1983 years birth. From 2003 to 2007, went study in the Southern China University life sciences and the technical institute, specialized
was the biological technology, after the graduation, after obtaining Neo-Confucianism bachelor's degree .2007 year in July graduated, starts to start an undertaking, in 2008 March felt the necessity which profoundly pursued advanced studies.
I want to study more knowledge. For me, South Korea is I best choice, may study Korean and English, understands more things. South Korea has first-class teaches
to nurture the pattern, first-class teachers strength, friendly people, outstanding teacher, these deep attraction I. I hoped to be able, in studies in the domain learns
many knowledge!
the Korean is the question which I must first solve, this is a challenge, but I have the confidence fast to integrate South Korea's study life but will not spend the too much time,
this will be a daily life part after all. in the study profession, my I energy, will master the knowledge earnestly, the expanded aspect of knowledge. When I complete my research, I will continue to pursue advanced studies, to strive for in South Korea to obtain
again the doctorate.
I will integrate the South Korean culture as soon as possible, will study earnestly, requests earnestly you to authorize my application, I hoped that you can provide the opportunity which will pursue advanced studies in South Korea! Thanks

Answer 2

这可是我翻了半天的！一定要设我为最佳答案啊！

My name is Ming-hui, from China, was born male .1983. From 2003 to 2007, who lives in the South China University of Science and Technology institutions, professional

Biotechnology, after graduating from the Bachelor of Science degree .2007 in July after graduating from business, in March 2008 deeply feel that the need for further studies.

I want to learn more knowledge. Me, Korea is the best choice I can learn Korean and English, learn more things. Korea have a first-class education

Fertility patterns, and first-rate faculty, and friendly people, good teachers, which are deeply attracted me and I hope that in the field of research to learn more

More knowledge!

Korean is my first problem to be solved, this is a challenge, but I am confident that South Korea's rapid integration into the study of life and will not spend too much time, after all,

This is part of everyday life.

In studying career, I will do my best to seriously grasp knowledge, and expand knowledge. When I finish my studies, I will continue to study for South Korea again in the

PhD.

I will be as soon as possible into the Korean culture, conscientious study, I urge your approval of the application, I hope you can provide a postgraduate opportunities in South Korea! Thank you!