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Question

I have two good friends .One is similar to me , but the other friend is different.
A friend who is similar to me named Chen .We are both crazy and greedy . We are both more outgoing than most kids . So ,we have some same habits. We like eating together.We like cartoons too . We always talk about cartoons in JAPAN.
My friend PING is quite different from me . Ping is quieter than me . She is more serious than me .She likes the Korean Stars. Such as MR.Dragon ,EXO. But I do not .
I don’t really care if my friend are the same as me or different . As long as, they are good.

Answer 1

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I have two good friends .One is similar to me , but the other friend is different.
A friend who is similar to me (is) named Chen .We are both crazy and greedy . We are both more outgoing than most kids . So ,we have some same habits. We like eating together.We like cartoons too . We always talk about cartoons in JAPAN.
My friend PING is quite different from me . Ping is quieter than me . She is more serious than me .She likes (没有the) Korean Stars. Such as MR.Dragon (and) EXO. But I do not .
I don’t really care if my friend are the same as me or different (, as long as) they are good.

有问题请追问

追问

as long as) they are good, as long as 不去掉的话会算错么

追答

这个不是去掉··括号里的是正确的语法·，如果要去掉 我会说 “没有...”
最后那句是if . . . , as long as they are good.

Answer 2

1、but the other one is different
2、The friend who is similar to me named Chen
3、We are both more outgoing than most of other kids
4、We always talk about cartoons from JAPAN
5、She likes the Korean Stars such as MR.Dragon and EXO whichI do not
6、I don’t really care that my friend is the same as me or not

Answer 3

I have two good friends .One is similar to me , but the other is different.
The friend who is similar to me named Chen .We are both crazy and greedy . We are more outgoing than most kids . So ,we share some same habits. We like eating together.We like cartoons too . We always talk about cartoons in JAPAN(是要表达日本动漫还是说用日语交谈？前者是we always talk about Japanese cartoons,后者是we always talk about cartoons in Japanese).
My friend PING is quite different from me . Ping is quieter than me . She is a serious girl. She likes the Korean Stars. Such as MR.Dragon ,EXO. But I do not .
I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or not, as long as they are good people .

追问

share some same habits，habit能用share么，求解

追答

可以的，share表示共享，共同拥有，对象可以是具体的也可以是抽象的。