帮我改一下高考英语的作文哈，谢谢了

Question

按湖南的评分标准给下分再帮我更正下错误，谢谢了 是关于中国式过马路的Chinese style of crossing road（参考词汇）
Recently,our class hosted a class meeting about "Chinese style of crossing road ".The so-called "Chinese style of crossing road "is many people crossing the road who are ignore the traffic light turn red .Many classmates think it is dangerous to cross the road when the red light is on .But others think "Chinese style of crossing road "has its own advantages such as :save time ,as long as the way don't impact the traffic .
In my opinion ,I agree the the former .The manner have to being forbidden ,because it is break the traffic laws and regulations.Meanwhile ,the manner is impolite to others who want to obey the laws .What 's more it have possible cause big accident .So we should aginst the "Chinese style of crossing road "and obey the law of traffic.

Answer 1

　　错误一：who 后面的are 多余，记住，一个句子里面只能出现一个动词
错误二：注意第三人称中动词也要相应的第三人称
错误三：第一段的最后一句 希望你可以改改说法，就是换一个更容易理解的说法。
其他的应该是没错了，下面是我改过之后的。。有那些地方不清楚的可以追问。。很乐意为你解答。。
　　The so-called "Chinese style of crossing road "is many people crossing the road who ignore the traffic light turns red .Many classmates think it is dangerous to cross the road when the red light is on .But others think "Chinese style of crossing road "has its own advantages such as saving time ,as long as it does not impact the traffic .
In my opinion ,I agree the the former .The manner have to being forbidden ,because it breaks the traffic laws and regulations.Meanwhile ,the manner is impolite to others who want to obey the laws .What 's more, it has possible to cause big accidents .So we should aginst the "Chinese style of crossing road "and obey the laws of traffic.

Answer 2

The Chinese style of crossing the road?
Recently, our class hosted a discussion about the Chinese style of crossing the road. The so called Chinese style of crossing the road is that many pedestrians who ignore the traffic lights while crossing the road. Many of the classmates opinned that it was dangerous to cross the road while the traffic light turing into red, but other thought that it was unique and with advantages of saving time, efforts etc so long as there was not impact any traffic condition - it is the Chinese sytle of crossing the road!
In my opinion, I agree with the former. Those ignore the traffic rules and pedestrian crossing facilities are prohibited as it is against the laws and regulations. It is impolite and rude to do so. Moreover, these actions may cause other road commuters in accident. As such, we should not adapt such Chinese style crossing the road and to obey the traffic rules.