很急啊,各位好人帮忙把下文翻译成英语~~不要机翻啊,可以简单的翻译但不要有语法错误.非常感谢感谢...

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大家好! 我先自我介绍下, 我叫*** 来自浙江龙泉. 龙泉我相信在座99%的同学没有去过 , 90%的同学之前没听说过, 那么现在我就带大家去我的家乡龙泉逛一逛.
龙泉被赋予了”青瓷之都,宝剑之乡”的美称, 有江浙第一高峰--- 凤阳山, 凤阳山脚下是欧江源头 一直流入温州. 龙泉的青瓷最有名的是官窑,大家应该都知道五大窑,官窑就是其中的一窑.宝剑,金庸先生的武侠片中用的都是龙泉宝剑.
龙泉没有上海的快节奏生活, 我们喜欢饭后去山上看看天空. 龙泉没有上海的高楼大厦, 我们喜欢邻居都是家人的生活;龙泉没有上海的繁华, 我们喜欢三五成群的去乡下钓钓鱼, 看看风景.放松心情;
不管你们喜欢不喜欢反正我喜欢我的家乡, 如果想去感受一下内心的宁静的同学,那么就跟我一起去吧! 包吃包住哟.
谢谢大家.

Answer 1

Good morning/afternoon/evening, ladies and gentlemen. I am ***, who is from Longquan, Zhejiang province. I guess a majority of you present never visited or even heard of my hometown Longquan before, which I am going to make a brief introduction at present.

Longquan is known as "the city of celadon porcelain and the homeland of sword". The headstream of Oujiang river is from Fengyanshan Mountain, which is the highest mountain of Jiangsu and Zhejiang province. The celadon porcelain of Longquan is relatively famous, as it is made from one of the five essential wares in China, called Guanware. And the swords, used in swordsmen films written by Mr. Jin Yong, are produced in our Longquan.

A great many skyscrapers or gorgeous and magnificent sceneries cannot be found in Longquan. Instead, we prefer to take a walk after lunch and go fishing with our friends. In short, Shanghai fast-paced lifestyle is not available here.

I can take those who want to experience the peace of mind to my hometown.

Thank you.

简简单单地把文章翻译完了，由于本人水平有限，而且原文多处表意不明，只能译成这样了。英语语言十分忌讳频繁更换主语，容易造成表意不明，啰嗦冗余。龙泉和上海进行比较的这一段明显前言不搭后语，“上海的高楼大厦”和“邻居都是家人的生活”二者分明就是驴唇不对马嘴，没有什么必然的联系，在翻译时进行了适当的调整和处理，不然翻译出来也是中式英语，毫无美感和意义。希望你能综合几个人翻译的，再好好修改修改，同时在今后英语口语和英语作文时也要注意培养英语的思维模式！祝进步！

Answer 2

Hello,everybody!
Let me introduce myself first, my name is XXX, I'm come from Longquan, Zhejiang Province.
I'm pretty sure that most of you haven't been to Longquan before, maybe you even have not heard of this place, never mind, I will show you my lovely hometown!
Firstly, Longquan is named as "City of Celadon and Home of sword", which placed the highest mountain-Fengyang Mountain. The source of Ou River is started at the foot of the mountain, and the river inflows to Wen Zhou.
Secondly, the most famous celadon in Longquan is Guanware, I think you should be familier with the Five Big Kiln,which includes Guanware;
Thirdly, Swords. The swords that used in JIn Yong's films were all made in Long Quan.
Long Quan's life pace can't be compare with Shanghai, we'd like to watch the stars on the mountain after dinner; We don't have many-storied buildings like Shanghai; We like the life that our neighbours are our family; Though Longquan is not as bustling as Shanghai, we really enjoy our life that we can go fishing in the downtown from now and then, and we can relax ourselves while watching the beauty views.
I like my hometown, I regard it as my paradise, and i'm sure you may be interested in this peaceful place, i'm very glad to be your guide, so, come! What are you waiting for!
Thanks!
文章有些细节部分我觉得条理不够清晰，所以我调整了一下，结尾部分我改动了一点，我觉得会更有煽动力，但是意思是一样的~

Answer 3

大家好! 我先自我介绍下, 我叫*** 来自浙江龙泉. 龙泉我相信在座99%的同学没有去过 , 90%的同学之前没听说过, 那么现在我就带大家去我的家乡龙泉逛一逛.
Hello,everybody,let me introduce myself first. my name is ***,i come from LongQuan.i believe that 99% students seated may havn't ever been to LongQuan yet,and 90% may even never heard of it,so why not go to my hometown LonQuan with me now ?
龙泉被赋予了”青瓷之都,宝剑之乡”的美称, 有江浙第一高峰--- 凤阳山, 凤阳山脚下是欧江源头 一直流入温州. 龙泉的青瓷最有名的是官窑,大家应该都知道五大窑,官窑就是其中的一窑.宝剑,金庸先生的武侠片中用的都是龙泉宝剑.
LonQuan is called to be the city of celadon,the hometown of sword.it owns the highest mountain in JiangSu and ZheJiang --FengYang mountian,on the feet of which is the source of the O river that flow into WenZhou.The most famous of the Longquan celadon is the Officer's kiln.You may know the Five Kiln,one of them is the Officer's kiln.Even the author JinYong use the LongQuan sword in his novels.
龙泉没有上海的快节奏生活, 我们喜欢饭后去山上看看天空. 龙泉没有上海的高楼大厦, 我们喜欢邻居都是家人的生活;龙泉没有上海的繁华, 我们喜欢三五成群的去乡下钓钓鱼, 看看风景.放松心情;
不管你们喜欢不喜欢反正我喜欢我的家乡, 如果想去感受一下内心的宁静的同学,那么就跟我一起去吧! 包吃包住哟
Instead of in Shanghai ,there is no rush life in LongQuan,we always climb moutain after meal so that we can watch the sky.And There is no high buildings in Longquan, we prefer the life that neighbors are our families.LongQuan is not a bustling city like shanghai at all,we take a fancy to go to the countryside to fish,to go sightseeing,to relax both our body and emotion.No matter whether you would fall in love with my hometown,if you want to experience the calm in heart ,then go with me.Provides food wraps up!
谢谢大家.
Thank you!

Answer 4

不是机翻，纯手工翻译，字斟句酌，希望采纳。
Hello,everyone.Now I will introduce myself, my name is ***, I come from Long Quan of Zhe Jiang province. I believe,99% of the classmates here haven't been to this city and 90% haven't heard of before, and now I will show my hometown Long Quan to you.
Long Quan is famous for Celadon Capital, sword of the town , where located the first high mountain --Feng Yang mountain, of which is headwater of Ou Jiang River, flowing into Wen Zhou city. The most famous of Long Quan Celadon is Official Kiln, I guess you all kown five Kiln,well, Official Kiln is one of them. As to sword,The famous writer ,Jin Yong ,in his Kungfu novel which always use Long Quan sword.
Life in Long Quan is not fast-paced as Shang Hai, we like walking along the mountain to watch the sky . Long Quan hasn't high buildings as Shang Hai,we enjoy the feelings that neighbors are family. Long Quan is not prosperous as Shang Hai, we are fond of going fishing in small groups at countryside, where we can enjoy the beautiful scenery and relax ourself.
whether you like my hometow or not , I love her. If some of you want to get a feeling --peace of mind , go with me , you will free to eat and stay .
That's all, Thank you for your attentain.

Answer 5

Hello! Let me introduce myself, my name is * * * from Zhejiang Longquan Longquan. I believe all of 99% students to 90% students before, never heard of, so now I will take you to my hometown Longquan stroll.Longquan was given a" celadon, sword town" reputation, a fifth first summit - Fengyang hill, Fengyang at the foot of the mountain is Ou river source has been flowing to Wenzhou. Longquan celadon is the most famous kilns, everyone should know five kiln, kiln is one of the kiln. The sword, Jin Yong's martial arts in the film are used in Longquan sword.Longquan is not Shanghai 's fast-paced life, we like to have a look after mountain sky. Longquan Shanghai many-storied buildings, our neighbors are like family life; Longquan no downtown Shanghai, we love to the country in groups of three and four fishing, have a look at the scenery. Relax;Whether you like it or not, I love my home, if you want to enjoy the peace of mind of classmates, then go with me! The bag eats encase.Thank you.