英语作文钱学森，给中文直接翻译，五一作业求帮忙，翻译不难但就是只能用五句话表达。ps下面翻译成3句英文

Question

1934年毕业于上海交通大学，随后往美国深造并获得航空学博士学位，1995年回国，从事航天科技事业。2009年11月逝世于北京。成绩斐然，被誉为“中国航天之父"和"火箭之王”。。。。这几句翻译成三句英文可以吗？不要那些有道还是金山的翻译，那种太多不准太多语法错误了。哪位英语高手帮帮忙，谢谢

Answer 1

He graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University in 1934 and went for further studies in America, obtaining a PHD of Aviation. In 1995, he returned to China and was devoted into aero science and technology. In November 2009, he passed away in Beijing with the world recognized contributions as "Father of Chinese Aviation" and "King of the Rockets".

Answer 2

In 1934 graduated from the Shanghai Jiao Tong University, then to the United States of America further education and received a doctor of Aeronautics degree, he returned to China in 1995, engaged in space science and technology. 2009passed away in Beijing in November. Achievement strikings, known as" the father of China's space" and" king of the rocket".... This sentence translated into English three sentences can be?

Answer 3

Graduated from Shanghai jiaotong university in 1934, then went to America for further study and get aviation, Ph.D. Degree. Returning to China in 1995, is engaged in space. In November 2009, died in Beijing. Excellent performance, is known as "the father of China's space" and "rocket king of the"

Answer 4

After graduating from Shanghai Jiao Tong University In 1934,he went to the United States for studying further, and was awarded a doctorate of aeronautics.Since he returned in 1995,Qian had devoted himself to China's space science and technology.In Nov. 2009,he died in Beijing. So outstanding that he is known as the "Father of China's space" and the "king of rockets".

Answer 5

Graduated from Shanghai jiaotong university in 1934, then went to America for further study and get aviation, Ph.D. Degree, returning to China in 1995, is engaged in space, science and technology. In November 2009, died in Beijing. Success, is known as "the father of China's space" and "the king"