各位英语高手帮忙改一改，谢谢了 1点前
A School
My primary school was'Qunxing Primary svhool'.We had a lot of fun there.Little did we know we were to be transfered to another school this year.
At the moment,I miss a friendly teacher.
As she is also a little plump, she gives people the impression that she is a patient,responsible and easygoing teacher.After class she often gives lessons to the students who have been absent form school.I like this teacher.
This school have some happy memories.I like this school.I didn't want to the new school.
My primary school is Qunxing Primary svhool. We had a lot of fun there. Little did we know that we were to be transfered to another school this year.
At the moment, I miss a friendly teacher very much.
As she is a little plump, she gives people the impression that she is a patient, responsible and easy-going teacher. After class she often gives lessons to the students who have been absent form school. I like this teacher.
I have some happy memories in this school. I like this school.I don't want to go to the new school.
写得挺好的，只不过有几处小问题，我试着改过来了。
My primary school was Qunxing Primary svhool.这句中was改为is.svhool改为School.
We had a lot of fun there.这句中had改为have.
As she is also a little plump. 这句中去掉As。追问
O(∩_∩)O谢谢
My primary school is 'Qunxing Primary svhool'.I had a lot of fun there.Little did I know I were to be transfered to another school this year.
At the moment,I recall a friendly teacher.
As she was also a little plump, she made a good impression that she is a patient,responsible and easygoing teacher.After class she often gave lessons to the students who have been absent form school.I like this teacher.
This school have some happy memories.I like this school.I didn't want to the new school.
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