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本文从比较法学的角度，以公司法的基本理论为依据，详细论述了美国现代公司法人治理结构中以独立董事为代表的分权制衡机制的演变和缺陷，并对国有企业治理现状和原因进行分析，旨在借鉴美国的实践经验,对我国国有企业引进独立董事制度的必要性以及应注意的问题进行初步探讨。
首先，本文根据“股东会中心主义”、“董事会中心主义”、“经理中心主义”这三种不同的美国公司治理中的分权制衡结构的演变和发展，对美国独立董事制度产生的背景、原因进行了详细的论述和推导，旨在介绍美国的实践经验说明公司治理中不同权利的特点，同时为本文以后对国有企业权力秩序的设计提供依据。
其次，本文介绍美国独立董事制度的发展实践和当前制度的基本设置，并对制度的缺陷进行了分析，完成了对美国这一制度的系统论述。
再次，文章就国有企业的“代理人控制失控”、“政企不分”这两个最为突出的问题，结合国有企业治理的实践分析了其产生的原因、危害，并综合美国的治理经验就独立董事制度解决这两个问题的可行性和必要性进行了严密的论证。
最后，论文介绍了我国独立董事的发展现状，就国有企业独立董事制度的建立提出了一些自己的建议。
。。。。。。高手在那里啊？？？？
这样的翻译我也会啊。法律翻译严谨点好不？
参考：我自己翻译的第一段：
In terms of comparative law, the dissertation expounds the legal institution of power division and balance acquisition in modem corporate governance structure of American, which is proud of its independent director system. Basing on rudimental theories of company law, this paper also focuses on the effective ways、necessity and methods of Chinese state-owned enterprises of independent director.

Answer 1

本文从比较法学的角度，以公司法的基本理论为依据，详细论述了美国现代公司法人治理结构中以独立董事为代表的分权制衡机制的演变和缺陷，并对国有企业治理现状和原因进行分析，旨在借鉴美国的实践经验,对我国国有企业引进独立董事制度的必要性以及应注意的问题进行初步探讨。
首先，本文根据“股东会中心主义”、“董事会中心主义”、“经理中心主义”这三种不同的美国公司治理中的分权制衡结构的演变和发展，对美国独立董事制度产生的背景、原因进行了详细的论述和推导，旨在介绍美国的实践经验说明公司治理中不同权利的特点，同时为本文以后对国有企业权力秩序的设计提供依据。
其次，本文介绍美国独立董事制度的发展实践和当前制度的基本设置，并对制度的缺陷进行了分析，完成了对美国这一制度的系统论述。
再次，文章就国有企业的“代理人控制失控”、“政企不分”这两个最为突出的问题，结合国有企业治理的实践分析了其产生的原因、危害，并综合美国的治理经验就独立董事制度解决这两个问题的可行性和必要性进行了严密的论证。
最后，论文介绍了我国独立董事的发展现状，就国有企业独立董事制度的建立提出了一些自己的建议

Answer 2

From the Angle of comparative law, company law, based on the basic theory are discussed in detail the modern corporate governance structure by independent directors as a representative of the separation of the evolution of the mechanism and the defect, and the state-owned enterprise management status and causes are analyzed, and the United States aimed at the practical experience of China's state-owned enterprises, the introduction of independent director system and the problems that should be paid attention to the necessity for a preliminary discussion.
Firstly, according to the meeting center "individualism", "directors", "the manager" these three different U.S. corporate governance structure of the separation of the evolution and development of America, the system of independent directors of the background, reasons discussed in detail and the derivation, aims to introduce the experience that American corporate governance in different rights, as well as the characteristics of state-owned enterprises after the paper provides the basis for the design of power order.
Secondly, this paper introduces the development of the system of independent directors and the practice of the system of basic setup and the institutional defects are analyzed, and the completion of the system of the system are described.
Again, the state-owned enterprise "agent", "runaway control both indistinction between the most prominent problems, combined with the practice of the state-owned enterprise management is analyzed, and the causes of damage, and comprehensive management experience is the American system of independent directors to solve these two problems on the necessity and feasibility of the tight.
Finally, the paper introduces the development status of our independent director's state-owned enterprises, establish the system of independent directors, puts forward some Suggestions. 用翻译器翻得

Answer 3

From the Angle of comparative law, company law, based on the basic theory are discussed in detail the modern corporate governance structure by independent directors as a representative of the separation of the evolution of the mechanism and the defect, and the state-owned enterprise management status and causes are analyzed, and the United States aimed at the practical experience of China's state-owned enterprises, the introduction of independent director system and the problems that should be paid attention to the necessity for a preliminary discussion.
Firstly, according to the meeting center "individualism", "directors", "the manager" these three different U.S. corporate governance structure of the separation of the evolution and development of America, the system of independent directors of the background, reasons discussed in detail and the derivation, aims to introduce the experience that American corporate governance in different rights, as well as the characteristics of state-owned enterprises after the paper provides the basis for the design of power order.
Secondly, this paper introduces the development of the system of independent directors and the practice of the system of basic setup and the institutional defects are analyzed, and the completion of the system of the system are described.
Again, the state-owned enterprise "agent", "runaway control both indistinction between the most prominent problems, combined with the practice of the state-owned enterprise management is analyzed, and the causes of damage, and comprehensive management experience is the American system of independent directors to solve these two problems on the necessity and feasibility of the tight.
Finally, the paper introduces the development status of our independent director's state-owned enterprises, establish the system of independent directors, puts forward some Suggestions.

Answer 4

This text is based on basic theories of the company law in terms of comparative jurisprudence, expound the fact U.S.A. modern company corporate governance structure represented by independent director fraction check and balance development and defect of the mechanism in detail, and manage current situation and reason and analyze to the state-owned enterprise, aim at using the practical experience of U.S.A. for reference, introduce the necessity of the independent director's system and question that should notice to the state-owned enterprise of our country to carry on the preliminary discussion.
First of all, the foundation of this text " doctrine of shareholders' meeting centre " , " doctrine of the centre of board of directors " , " doctrine of manager's centre " Three different fraction control, Company of American, these check and balance development and development of the structure, the background, reason produced to U.S.A.'s independent director's system have carried on the detailed argumentation and derived, aim at the characteristic of different rights while managing of stating the company of American practical experience of introduction, right after at the same time for this text