高分求助：英语翻译

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摘 要
随着信息化的高速发展，各种行业都由原来的工作方式转化为现代的信息化自动化办公。现代教育界，教师教学还是通过纸质来检查，考查同学，并且现在的大学教育都为自学．学生们碰到一些问题是不能及时得到解答．同时也降低了教师教学的质量，增加了教师的工作量．所以，教学平台就是为了服务师生而开发,可以合理的利用现在信息的资源。
基于WEB的网络教学平台是一种基于网络的Browser/Server模式并可在Intranet网络环境下运行的应用软件。通过强大的超链接、网络交互、多媒体演示的优势，实现师生共同参与，互教互学的一个真正的“学习共同体”。本文主要实现了师生交流平台与信息管理模块：师生交流平台模块主要功能有创建专题讨论区、提出问题、问题列表；信息管理模块主要功能是添加公告、公告管理、公告类型管理。
关键词：教学资源管理;网络教;JAVA技术

下面是用翻译软件翻译的，不够专业，求助专业版！！！！！！

Abstract
With the rapid development of information, from various industries into the working methods of modern automated office information. Modern education, teachers or through the paper to check, test students, and university education is for self-study. The students encountered some problems can not be answered in time. At the same time also reduced the quality of teaching staff, an increase of the workload of teachers. Therefore, teaching platform is developed in order to serve the teachers and students, it is reasonable to use the information resources now.
WEB-based network teaching platform is a Web-based Browser / Server mode and in Intranet network environment to run applications. Hyperlinks through the powerful, network interface, the advantages of multimedia presentation, the teachers and students to participate in implementation, interactive study of a true "learning community." In this paper, the implementation platform for teachers and students communicate with the information management module: teacher-student exchange platform has the main function module to create discussion topics, ask questions, a list of questions; information management module main function is to add a notice, bullet in management, notice the type of management.
Key words： online education :teaching resources management; JAVA technology
不要翻译软件的版本

Answer 1

Abstract
With the rapid development of information technology, a variety of sectors from the original work into a modern information-based office automation. Modern education, teachers or through the paper to check, test students, and university education is for self-study. Students some of the problems encountered can not be answered in time. At the same time also reduced the quality of teaching staff, an increase of the workload of teachers. Therefore, the teaching platform is developed to serve teachers and students, it is reasonable the use of information resources.
WEB-based network teaching platform is a Web-based Browser / Server mode and can run under the network environment Intranet applications. Hyperlinks through the powerful, network interaction, multi-media presentation of the advantages, the realization of the teachers and students to participate in interactive, a real "Learning Community." In this paper, the realization of the teacher-student exchange platform and information management module: teacher-student exchange platform for the main function module to create discussion topics, ask questions, the problem list; information management module main function is to add a notice, bulletin management, notice the type of management.
Key words: teaching resources management; Network Services; JAVA technology
这是用Google翻译的
Abstract
With the rapid development of information technology, a variety of sectors from the original work into a modern information-based office automation.Modern education, teachers or through the paper to check, test students, and university education is for self-study. Students some of the problems encountered can not be answered in time. At the same time also reduced the quality of teaching staff, an increase of the workload of teachers. Therefore, the teaching platform is developed to serve teachers and students, it is reasonable the use of information resources.
WEB-based network teaching platform is a Web-based Browser / Server mode and can run under the network environment Intranet applications. Hyperlinks through the powerful, network interaction, multi-media presentation of the advantages, the realization of the teachers and students to participate in interactive, a real "Learning Community."In this paper, the realization of the teacher-student exchange platform and information management module: teacher-student exchange platform for the main function module to create discussion topics, ask questions, the problem list; information management module main function is to add a notice, bulletin management, notice the type of management. Key words: teaching resources management; Network Services; JAVA technology
这是iclba翻译的http://www.iciba.com/
事实证明,这是最专业的回答了!

Answer 2

Abstract:

Along with the rapid development of information industry, all of the original work into modern informatization office automation. Modern education, teachers' teaching or through the paper to check, examines the university students, and now for self-study education. The students met some problem cannot be solved timely. Also reduced the teaching quality, increase the teachers. So, teaching platform for students, and develop service can reasonable use of information resources now.
The network teaching platform based on WEB is a kind of Browser/Server based on network model and can run in one under the network environment, the application software. Through the powerful hyperlinks, network interactive multimedia demo, the advantage and realize the lessons, and participation in a real "learning community". This paper realized the teacher-student communication platform and information management module: teacher-student communication platform, main function modules are creating workshops, questions, problems list, Information management module main function is to add announcement, announcement management, public announcement type management.

Keywords: teaching resource management;Network teaching;JAVA technologies

Answer 3

Abstract
With the rapid development of information technology, a variety of sectors from the original work into a modern information-based office automation. Modern education, teachers or through the paper to check, test students, and university education is for self-study. Students some of the problems encountered can not be answered in time. At the same time also reduced the quality of teaching staff, an increase of the workload of teachers. Therefore, the teaching platform is developed to serve teachers and students, it is reasonable the use of information resources.
WEB-based network teaching platform is a Web-based Browser / Server mode and can run under the network environment Intranet applications. Hyperlinks through the powerful, network interaction, multi-media presentation of the advantages, the realization of the teachers and students to participate in interactive, a real "Learning Community." In this paper, the realization of the teacher-student exchange platform and information management module: teacher-student exchange platform for the main function module to create discussion topics, ask questions, the problem list; information management module main function is to add a notice, bulletin management, notice the type of management.
Key words: teaching resources management; Network Services; JAVA technology