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认识了你,让我知道我要学习的地方还很多.

认识了你,让我知道我原来一点都不成熟.

认识了你,让我知道相互珍惜如此重要.

认识了你,让我知道生活还是很美好.

Understand you, let me know that I have a lot to learn from.
Understand you, let me know I was not the original maturity.
Understand you, let me know mutual cherish so important.
Understand you, let me know that life is very beautiful.

从那天起，我开始爱你.

就注定是你

我发现我原来是个孩子,一个自认为已经长大的孩子.

两个人的世界中,我竟然不知道如何相处.

也许是心理的疾病.

我不想追究原因,我也不想固执的去恨谁.

没有必要.

From that day onwards, I began to love you.
It is destined to be you
I found that I had a child, one that has since grown up children.
Two people in the world, I actually do not know how to get along with.
Perhaps psychological diseases.
I do not want to be, I do not want to hate the stubborn Who.
Unnecessary.

学习,我在学习.

也许进程很慢,但我在努力.

希望你能看到,感觉到.

Study, I study.
Perhaps the process has been very slow, but in my efforts.
I hope you can see that.

所以我希望,我们继续的活着.

继续的快乐.

有伤心,有感动,有泪水,有笑容.

只要,在一起.

我们不说曾经,因为它已没有意义.

我们不说现在,因为彼此感受着.

我们不说未来,因为我的未来注定有你.

So I hope that we continue to live.
Continued happiness.
There are sad, moving, tears, a smile.
If, together.
We do not have that, because it has no significance.
We do not say that now, because of their feelings.
We do not say the future, the future is because I have you.

Answer 1

认识了你,让我知道我要学习的地方还很多.
认识了你,让我知道我原来一点都不成熟.
认识了你,让我知道相互珍惜如此重要.
认识了你,让我知道生活还是很美好.

Getting to know you, let me know that I have a lot to learn.
Getting to know you, let me know I am not matual at all.
Getting to know you, let me know mutual cherishment is so important.
Getting to know you, let me know that life is actually very beautiful.

从那天起，我开始爱你.
就注定是你
我发现我原来是个孩子,一个自认为已经长大的孩子.
两个人的世界中,我竟然不知道如何相处.
也许是心理的疾病.
我不想追究原因,我也不想固执的去恨谁.
没有必要.

From that day onwards, I began to love you.
It is destined to be you
I found that I am only a child, one who thinks he has grown up.
I don't know how to do in a world of two.
Perhaps it's psychological. (我说谈情说爱的你说疾病做什么？心理上的就可以啦)
I don't want a reason, I don'ot want to stubbornly hold onto the hate.
It's unnecessary.

学习,我在学习.
也许进程很慢,但我在努力.
希望你能看到,感觉到.

Learning, I'm learning.
Perhaps it has been very slow, but I'm trying.
Wish you can see it and feel it.

所以我希望,我们继续的活着.
继续的快乐.
有伤心,有感动,有泪水,有笑容.
只要,在一起.
我们不说曾经,因为它已没有意义.
我们不说现在,因为彼此感受着.
我们不说未来,因为我的未来注定有你.

So I hope that we go on living.
Being happy.
There are sadness, movement, tears, and smiles.
As long as we are together.
We do not talk about the past, because it's meaningless.
We do not talk about the now, because we are feeling each other.
We do not talk about the future, because in my future, I have you.