英语翻译,帮忙修改下面这段话,谢谢!满意必采纳!

Josh Woodward’s song is belongs to folk music. This is the first time I heard his singing, I listen to this song again and again as I was carriedaway by his song.
He sang the songs to the guitar. His voice sounds tender and sophisticated, his voice would fit any kind of ballad.The melody, pure and understated, unfolds softly and pleasingly.
I also like the change in pace and mood.Josh Woodward proved to be a great singer, and he showed off his vocalin his ballad songs. I want to download more his songs from internet, and share his songs to my friend, I think they will like his songs, too.

    用一般现在时就好了

    is belongs to改为belongs to

    I (加上have) heard his music: it is the/my ...(1st, 2nd...) time (that) +现在完成时

    be carried away 情感色彩会偏向不太好的方面,最好改一下:be fascinated(attracted) by

    to the guitar 不对,可以说sing while playing the guitar(边弹边唱)

    改一下这句,变成:His voice sounds so tender and so sophisticated that it could fit any kind of ballad.

    The melody,(加上which sounds) pure and understated

    Josh Woodward proved himself an awesome singer更好

     and he shows his wonderful voice off in his ballad songs

    more (of) his songs from (the) Internet

    to my friend, 这里的逗号错了,要改成分号或句号I think they will like his songs, too.

    全部手打,求采纳!

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第1个回答  2014-08-28
Josh Woodward’s song is belongs to folk music. (is删除 多余了)
Josh Woodward的歌属于乡村音乐。
This is the first time I heard his singing, (heard前面加have 应该用完成时)
这是我第一次听他歌唱,
I listen to this song again and again as I was carried away by his song.
我循环往复地听着这首歌,因为我对他的歌着了迷。
He sang the songs to the guitar. (the 多余 去掉)
他弹着吉他唱着歌。
His voice sounds tender and sophisticated,
他的嗓音听起来温柔又复杂(“复杂”的引申义大概是“有内涵”)
his voice would fit any kind of ballad.(would fit 改成fits)
他的嗓音适合唱任何一种民谣。
The melody, pure and understated, unfolds softly and pleasingly.
那种旋律,纯正又低沉,柔软又愉快地绵延开来。
I also like the change in pace and mood.(change应该为复数 加s)
我也喜欢那节拍和情感上的变化。
Josh Woodward proved to be a great singer, (proved 前面加was)
Josh Woodward 被证明是个伟大的歌手,
and he showed off his vocal in his ballad songs. (off移动到vocal后面)
他在民谣里展示了他自己的嗓音。
I want to download more his songs from internet, ( more后加of ,from 后面加 the)
我想从互联网上下载更多他的歌曲,
and share his songs to my friend, I think they will like his songs, too.( friend改成friends )
并且和朋友们分享他的歌曲,我想,他们也会喜欢上他的歌的。
第2个回答  2014-08-28
乔西 伍德沃德的歌曲属于民谣。这是我第一次听他的歌曲, 一次又一次反复地听着他的歌曲感觉自己深深被他的歌吸引了。

他边唱边弹吉他,他的声音是如此的温柔而有深度。他的声音适合任何形式的民谣。这旋律纯净易懂温柔愉悦地舒展开来。
我也喜欢这节奏和情感。乔西 伍德沃德是一名伟大的歌手,在vocalin这首民谣里表现的淋漓尽致。我想要在网上下载更多他的歌曲,然后分享给我的朋友们,我认为他们也会喜欢他的歌。
第3个回答  2014-08-28
乔希·伍德沃德的歌属于民间音乐。这是我第一次听到他唱歌,我仿佛着迷般,反复听着他的这首歌。
他弹着吉他唱歌,声音听起来温柔的而精细,适合任何类型的民谣。旋律舒展柔美,委婉质朴。
我也喜欢节奏和情绪的变化。乔希·伍德沃德被证明是一个伟大的歌唱家,他在他的民谣歌曲中展示了他的声音。我想从网上下载更多他的歌曲,把他的歌曲分享给我的朋友,我想,他们也会喜欢他的歌的。
第4个回答  2014-08-28
Josh Woodward’s song belongs to folk music. This is the first time that I heard his song, I listen to this song again and again as I was carried away by his song.
He sang the songs with the guitar. His voice sounds tender and sophisticated, his voice could fit any kind of ballad.The melody, pure and understated unfold softly and pleasingly.
I also like the change in pace.Josh Woodward proved to be a great singer since he showed his ballad songs. I want to download more of his songs from Internet, and share his songs to my friendS, I think they will like his songs, too.
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