麻烦帮我看看这段话的语法错误！谢谢了 我们老师说有语法表达错误。但这段话是摘抄自英文网站上的。

Question

In order to realized these results Zara developed a business model that incorporated the following three goals for operations: develop a system the requires short lead times, decrease quantities produced to decrease inventory risk, and increase the number of available styles and/or choice.

为了达到这一结果，Zara创立了包含以下3个目标的商业模式：建立一个交货期短的系统，减少产量以减少库存风险，增加风格和选择。

实在抱歉，，我现在也没有钱了。所以不能提供悬赏币
表示语法错误点是在 develop a system the requires short lead times, decrease quantities produced to decrease inventory risk 这句中。但我没有看出来，老师说有两个否定词，多余了。而且表达意思不明确。

Answer 1

首先，system后面的the应该改为that， 定语从句。develop a system that requires short lead times.这里that指代system。不知道是不是打错了。

第二个，老师说的两个否定词，我觉得语法没有问题，只是两个减少都用decrease有点重复，可以换一个动词，reduce，或lower什么的。

Answer 2

In order to realize these results, Zara developed a business model that incorporated the following three goals for operation. Firstly, develop a system the requires short lead time.Secondly, decrease production quantity so as to reduce inventory risks. Lastly, increase the number of available styles and/or choices.
已经修改，你看是否可以？

Answer 3

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