麻烦帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误

he must sold Several machines to maintain the family every month, but he has not been sold a machine for several months, the economy of his family is growing tension at home, his wife choose to leave because of the Economic burden , leaving Chris and his 5-year-old son to rely on each other, soon they were evicted out of the apartment with no mongey to pay
原文:
但是他已经好几个月没有卖出一台机器了,家里的经济越来越紧张,妻子最终因为经济的负担而选择离开,留下克里斯和他5岁的儿子相互依靠,很快他们便因为没钱付房租被赶出了公寓,

第1个回答  2008-06-19
额。。。错了啦。。。有些时态和语态错误,用词也有不准的地方。。。

我来翻译看看。。。

But he hasn't sold out any machine since several months ago,which made the situation of his family much worse.
His wife finally chose to leave for the sake of economy burden,leaving Chris and his 5-year-old son to live depending on each other .No lone after that,they were driven out of the apartment because they couldn't afford it any more.
第2个回答  2008-06-18
只是针对你的原文应该是:
But he has been for several months does not sell a machine, the economy growing tension at home, his wife since the end of the economic burden and choose to leave, leaving Chris and his 5-year-old son to rely on each other, because soon they will have no money to pay Accommodation was out of the apartment,
第3个回答  2008-06-18
这要是没有 那就没有错句了

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