第1个回答 2008-10-29
有两种翻译方法,书面语言和口头用语
口头用语:I had a terrible day today. I woke up this morning,and i have a horrible stomachache. So I had to go to this clinic close by to get some pills. After I came to school, everything seemed to go wrong. I tripped at the school gate and ran into this guy. I went to the office to get some hot water to take the pills, but there was a long lineup. Finally, it got to my turn, but the water ran out. It was terrible! I rushed to the classroom on the bell, not finished reviewing the vocabulary. After the dictation, I felt so bad. It turned out to be 9 out of 13. I was called to the teacher's office. The teacher was mad,"This is your work! Go back and correct them!" Perhaps you didn't know, I felt ashamed of myself and rewrote the 13 words twenty times each and turned it back to you. But you still called my parents. I ran out of the office with tears. When i got home my mom was on the phone, so I decided to tell her later. After she hung up, she looked very upset. I asked her why, and she said:"Your grandpa is very sick, and it is very serious." I felt horrible, i didn't want to upset her even more by telling her the news, so i kept it to myself.
I hope you can understand me. Please give me one last chance, and I promise I will be very good.
书面语言:
Today is horrible day. In the morning, my stomach was hurting terribly. I went to a nearby hospital and picked up some medication. I tripped stepping through the school gate, and bumped into people. I went into the office to get some hot water to take the medicaion...however, there was a gigantic line up. When it finally got to my turn, the water unfortunately ran out! it is a terrible day! the bell rang,and I rushed back to the class, i haven't memorized all the vocabulary, after the dictation, i thought i did really poorly. and, it turned out i got 9 out of 13. i was called to the office, the teacher was very angry: "This is what you did! go back and correct them!" Maybe you do not know, i felt very bad about the mark, and i wrote the 13 words 20 times each. but you still called my parents, i ran out of the office with tears in my eyes. when i came home, my mother was on the phone, so i waited her to finish. She hang up the phone, looking very depressed. I asked what happened, she said: "your granpa is sick. the illness is very serious." I did not want her to become even more upset by telling her my horrible news, so i kept the words to myself.
I hope you can please forgive me and give me one last chance! I will make good use of it.
好了,这次帮你了,不过建议你改改,那点“好不容易轮到我还没水了”有点假,应该说“刚吞下了药,上课铃就响了”
第2个回答 2008-10-28
Today is bad day in the morning, the appetite for pain. To a nearby hospital and took drugs. In the school as if nothing and I oppose, Jinxiao Men wrestling, were also hit. Office of the hot water then went to take medicine, where there are a lot of people. Finally my turn to the still water. Really bad! Class rang, I rushed back to the classroom, the words have not yet back after dictation, that's too bad the silent, resulting in a silent 13 wrong 4. I was summoned to the office of the division was furious: "This is the silence of your words! To go back and write!" Maybe you do not know that I am very self-reproach had 13 words each of the 20 will write to you to pay it When you request or ask my parents, my tears ran out of the office, home mother is answer the phone, I would like to tell him this. Mother hung up the phone after the very sad. I asked him how it, he said: "Grandpa you sick, very serious." I was also very difficult subject, I do not want to blow my mother did not tell him the truth.
I hope that in the division will be able to understand me and give me one last chance! I will make good use of this!
这绝对是最最权威的翻译的哦,是最最经得起检验的哦,楼主,你可要把最佳回答给偶哈.嘻嘻嘻嘻!
不过偶这译得太好啦,你那个于师可能一下子就能看得出不是出自你手的哦,唉,你还是自己好自为之,好好学习为上呀!!!本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2008-10-28
是写的作文么?看来你的中文作文也不是很好.要加强一下了,整篇作文就是一条流水!
Today was not my day!I got a terrible stomachache when I got up this morning. I had to go to the hospital and took some pills. But everyting seemed against to me. I fell down at the school gate, and hitted one people. After I was in shool, I went to get hot water in teacher's office for my pills, when there was so crowd there.Finally was my turn, but no water left.That's totally terrible!At that time,the bell rang, I ..........
我实在是翻不下去了!真是不知道你是什么水平,怎么能把一篇中文文章都写成这个样子!回去把这篇中文的写好了再来叫人翻!
第4个回答 2008-10-28
Today is a bad day.Just when I get up this moning,the stomach start to pain.Then I go to the hospital of neighborhood for a medicine.
When I arrive the school,my bad day just begin. First,I fall down at the school get and hit a people.Then I go to the office for a cup of water to take the medicine, and there are a lot of people ,so I have to wait .Very soon it's my turn for water,but the water has been go out of.It' too bad.There comes the ring, I run back to the classroom in a hurry, but I have't recite the words,so I get a bad result in the test:I get 4 errors in 13 words.So Miss yu is very angery,he told me to the office and ask me to rewrite the words.I'm very remorse,I write every word 20 times.When I hand in my book,you ask my parents to see you.I run out of the office with tears.
when I get home,my mother is taking a telephone,so I decide to tell her this thing after her finish the phone.But when my mother fisish the phone,she is very sad,she tell me that grandmother have a serious illness.I don't want to strick my mother,so I den't tell my mother this yhing.
I hope that Miss yu can forgive me,give me the last chanse! I promiss to collect my error and work hard.
首先同情你的遭遇。
因为不知道你是初中还是高中生,所以全部用了一般现在时,考虑到你的英语可能不太好,所以用的都是比较简单的语法(这样不容易看出不是自己写的),呵呵。
祝你好运!