麻烦高手帮忙写个英文介绍！～～

Question

如题：

我叫XXX．来自XX．专业是艺术设计．来上海半年了，之前从事室内设计工作．虽然我只有半年的工作经验，英语水平也一般，但是我坚信勤能补拙．很高兴有这次面试机会，并希望能有幸获得这份工作，非常感谢。

别整个翻译机的啊．麻烦大家了！好了还有追加

Answer 1

My name is XXX, from XX. and majored in art design(把专业major做动词,可以减少面试时不停的I或者my的中国英语的感觉,major是卷舌音,不要忘了哦!).
I have been in Shanghai for more than a half year(卷舌音), working in interior(卷舌音) design. Although I have working experience for only half a year, I'm sitll working on my English now(这样说,体现了你还在学,且避免了英语暂时不好的这种弱智的表达,记住,人资一会挑你的语音,二会挑你的逻辑^_^), I believe I can make it. It is my pleasure to have this job interview. I wish I could have this job. Thank you very much.
一定要练熟,一定要发准每个音,按照我的文本练,不自信的词,查金山词霸,流利之后,你的要价千万不要少于3200左右,否则,是没底气的表现.

Answer 2

Morning every body!! I'm ... who from .and my major is art design. Having stayed Shanghai for half a year i acquire many useful experience ,although my oral english is not so exllent i believe i can do better after my hardworking ...Tt's my honour to attand this interview and i really like this postion ,looking forward to your early reply...Thank you!!

Answer 3

My name is XXX, from XX. My major is art design. I have been in Shanghai for more than half a year, working in interior design. Although I have working experience for only half a year, and my English is not very good, I believe I can work hard to learn everything well and fast. It is my pleasure to have this interviewing opportunity. I wish I can have this job. Thank you very much.

Answer 4

My name is ***, coming from **. I am majoring in Art Disign. I have been in Shanghai for half a year, and worked as an interior decorator. During the half year's work experience, I learnt a lot, though my English is not very good. However, I definitely believe that hard work can make me a full man. It is my honor to have this chance of interview. Finally, I wish I can be competent for this job. Thank you very much.