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Question

my holiday life in the summer

nowadays i have graduated my junior high school for over 1 week ,i plan to go to ZHONGSHAN Park to sleep for whole night alone first ,and i think i can Live aboard for a few days because everyone is looking forward to enjoying a different life for at least 1 months,whether you can do it or not , we all can talk with many who we are interested in on line , such as by qq, by msn...,this is what most people will do,so will i,but i am different from all of you ,i Will do the greatest things in the world ,not ONLY for humans but also to future,i May become a ghosts ,aim to be against all the bad things,so i think this summer is a great opportunity for me to challenge my self!

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nowadays i have graduated my junior high school for over 1 weeks ,i plan to go to ZHONGSHAN Park to sleep for whole night alone first ,and i think i can stay for a few days because everyone is looking forward to enjoying a different life for at least 1 month,whether you can do it or not , we all can talk with many people who we are interested in on line , such as by qq, by msn...,this is what most people will do,so will i,but i am different from all of you ,i Will do the greatest things in the world ,not ONLY for humans but also for future,i May become a ghosts ,aim to be against all the bad things,so i think this summer is a great opportunity for me to challenge myself!
在我已经毕业了我初中的超过1周，我计划去一个人去中山公园睡整夜，我想我可以住上几天，大家都期待着至少1个月不同的生活，你是否可以做还是不做，我们可以在网上与许多人我们对感兴趣的讨论，如QQ，MSN……，这是大多数人都会做的事，所以我会，但我不同于你们所有人，我将要做世界上最好的事情，不仅为人类，也为今后，我可能会成为一个鬼魂，目的是对所有不好的东西，所以我认为这个夏天我要挑战自己，一个好的机会！

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