Music plays a positive role in my everyday life.When I felt upset（沮丧）,I can chat with my friends（复数比较好） or just go (go 和chat是并列的,都在can后,都用原型） around while the perfect way is turning on the Mp3（这句话没看懂,你想表达什么呢?如果你想说听着音乐走走可以说,or just go around with the music encouraging me)!Music always( always 比would要好一些,它表状态,和持续性） cheer me up !
All in all,I love music and（and这里前面无需加逗号） I can't live without it（前面刚提过music,避免重复,用it）!,8,My favorite hobby is music. There are plenty of music files on my puter. I stored them in different folders and personalised the folders with different names. For example, Jazz, LadyGAGA, Symphony,...,1,My favorite hobby is to listen to music. There are plenty of musical files in my puter. I store them in different folders with different names, such as Jazz, Lady GAGA, Symphony and the like.
M...,1,My favorite hobby is music. There are plenty of music files in my puter. I stored them in different folders and personalised the folders with different names. For example, Jazz, LadyGAGA, Symphony,...,0,I have a lot of different hobby, and my favorite one is listening to music. There are plenty of music files in my puter folders. I will store them in different folders that wilh a different name I ...,0,帮我修改一下这篇作文,英语作文.
My favorite hobby is music.There are plenty of music files in my puter.I stored them in different folders and personalised the folders with different names.For example,Jazz,LadyGAGA,Symphony,and so on.
Music plays a positive role in my everyday life.When I felt unhappy,I can chat with my friend or just going around while the perfect way is turning on the Mp3!Music would cheer me up again!
All in all,I love music,and I can't live without music!
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I'm glad to meet you here! My name is Chen Kaiyan. My English name is Melody. My birthday is on April 24, 1996. I am a girl, I am 13 years old, the primary school in second. On weekends, I also want to go shopping, listen to music, and playing computer games at ...
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自己很认真修改的,有问题请追问、希望及时采纳—— 多谢 ⌒_⌒,9,帮我修改下这篇英语作文吧~To go abroad for further study or to take a more advanced course of study or look for work as post-graduate students.I consider these questions of each graduating college students are thinking...
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With the develop and the widely used of the internet,shopping online is becoming a part of our life.Everything has dual characters,shopping online has advantages and disadvantages also.Advantages:People can buy anything from the internet as long as he has enough money.And you can re...
请大家帮我修改一下英语作文 : The hero in my eyes
In my opinion, a policeman is the hero in my eyes. In fact policemen can be seen everywhere. They catch thieves as well as keep our cities safe.In other words, we can't live without them. If people lose something, a policeman will try to find it for them.If people need...
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fight pollution. In my opinion, we can't pour the wast water into the river. We can't put the waste gas in the air as well.Therefore, I hope all of the people can be responsible for it so that our would will be more and more beautiful.水平有限，希望能帮到你 ...
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You can buy many beautiful pen-bags which were did by ourselves in there.(你的原句）这句里面的错误有 were 和did2个动词一起并列，in there副词前面还带介词。You和ourselves 指示关系矛盾。可以改为：You can buy many beautiful DIY pen-bags there.(不用强调是我们，或是谁做的，你说...
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1， Dear dad: As the Thanksgiving Days is coming, I think you must be the first man through all my life I ought to express my gratitude.You did so much for me not only in material but also in psychology. Due to my silent character, I have never bothered you even...
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而it是泛指情况的非人称代词，用作表语是指这种情况本身是场大灾难，句子本身无可非议，但改为it’s getting terribly catastrophic[情况越来越成为灾难性的不幸]似乎更妥。）Acid rain will make the（冠词去掉，意见同上）water polluted, then the life （改为lives，因为水中有各种生命）in the （...
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trees,instead of it we should plant a lot of trees.What's more, we should use less plastic things.Let's become green consumers to make our world more beautiful，shall we？重新给你整理了一下结构，补充了些材料，换了一些表达方式，并将语病修改了。希望作为参考，自己再修改一下。
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1、Under是介词，不能引导从句，改为——As the current employment situation is grim, （由于当前就业形势十分严峻）2、句子不完整，改为it is … that句型——it is probably a good way to lighten social bearing capability that a certain number of the graduates register themselves as post-...
