我写的英语作文请帮我看下有没有语法错误请帮忙改正谢谢

Question

Create a Green Campus
Nowadays, more and more people prefer greating a green campus, because it plays significant role in our daily life. It has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life.
The green campus is not only in green environment, but also it refers to a campus that acts to decrease its impact on the environment .It will be basis of establishing a harmonious campus in the long term.
To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthy doing. As for me, I belivev it is hight time that we took some effective measures to set down strict laws and regulations to educate those student who don’t throw rubbish away. On the other hand, we can appeal to students that should keep the realization.A bright future is waiting for us when all the measures are taken seriously implementation.

这个是我按照找的作文模版写的,我英语很差,帮忙看下有没有语法错误.如果这是四级考试能得多少分 谢谢!

Answer 1

To sovle the problem改成Sovling the problem会更好；
regulations to educate those student 中student要改成复数students；
who don’t throw rubbish away中don’t 删除，不然意思刚好相反；
On the other hand最好删除或者改成Additional，因为前文没有On one hand相呼应；
is waiting for us when all the measures 中when最好改成if；

Answer 2

第二段but also后的it删去
believe high time

Answer 3

belivev ？？？？？