帮忙翻译一封商务信函，请不要使用翻译软件，求英语高手顺手帮个忙，不甚感谢~

Question

中文大意如下，希望能翻译的贴近米国style一些，thankyou~
这里是中国浙江省杭州metek五金技术有限公司，非常高兴认识你！我们公司对明年的拉斯维加斯五金展（NHS）很有兴趣，打算明年去参观一下这个展会。但是，这是我们是第一次参加，一点经验都没有，在这希望能咨询一些事情：
1.观展的申请流程和参展的申请流程一样吗？是不是只要填写一张参会报名表和一张非移民签证邀请函申请表就可以获得邀请函了？
2.明年我们公司有2个人想去观展，我们需要申请一张还是两张邀请函？
3.假设我们申请到邀请函，我们还需要展会的门票吗？如果需要，我们该怎么获得？
如果你能帮我们解决这些问题，我们将非常非常非常感谢~

Answer 1

DearXX:
This is Hangzhou Metek(MetalTech.) Co., Ltd., Thank you for your invitation, we are very interested in the 20XXNational Hardware Show in Las Vegas and willing to pay a visit then. As it willbe the first time for us to participate in such an event, we sincerely hopethat we could be provided with some useful information about the followingquestions.
1. What is the application procedurefor visitors?
2. Can we get an invitation by fillingthe Registration Form and the Non-Immigrant Visa Invitation Application Form? Anddo we need two invitations for two persons?
3. Are the admission tickets alsorequired if we already have the invitations? If so, how can we get them?
We will be very grateful if youcan provide any useful information and we are eagerly looking forward to yourreply.

Yours XXX
Dec. 23rd, 2014

追问

还行，但第一个问题问的太简单了，用另一个人的了~也谢谢你~

Answer 2

写商务信函啊，那得正式一点。
On behalf of China's Metek Hardware Technology Compay we are honor to meet you！We have great concerned about the Hardware Show of Las Vegas（NHS）next year，and we are going to participate in with strong interest。As our first participation，we need to inquiry something for lacking experience：
1、Is the same application process of exhibition as participation？could we get the invitation just we fill an entry form and invitation letter of non-immigrant visa？
2、Do we need one or two invitation if we send two representatives next year？
3、Will the tickets be required if we get the invitation？How could we get it if necessary？
If you can reply our inquiries we would be grateful。

PS：公司名“中国浙江省杭州metek五金技术有限公司”你在署名那里标明即可。

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赞~就是你了

追答

谢谢，请采纳~

Answer 3

Chinese are close to us, the hope can translate some of style, thankyou~ here is the Zhejiang province Hangzhou China metek Hardware Technology Co. Ltd., is very pleased to meet you! Our company for the Las Vegas hardware exhibition next year (NHS) is very interested in, going to go and visit the exhibition. However, this is we are the first to participate in, a little bit of experience are not, in the hope to consult some things: 1 exhibition of the application process and the exhibitor application process? Is not only to fill in a registration form and a non immigrant visa invitation application form can get the invitation? 2 next year we have 2 people want to visitors, we need to apply one or two invitations? 3 suppose we apply to the invitation, we also need to show tickets? If need be, how do we get? If you can help us to solve these problems, we will be very very thank you very much ~ ~ ~

追问

一看就是在线翻译的。。。

Answer 4

大家都好棒。。我只是来凑热闹的。。本来想中午翻译后来留着页面忘记了。。

Answer 5

我觉得，这样跨国联系很累。我建议：
1）请一位英语稍好的人士帮助你们联系。
2）直接在网上找“美国拉斯维加斯会展中心”，到官方网站直接用中文询问。网站有“企业QQ"

如果参展申请成功，建议带上一位英文翻译人士一起去参展。

试试看？希望帮到你！

追问

额，我们就是外贸的，不过我是行政的，不怎么熟悉英文商务信函，谢谢

追答

呵呵！不好意思！
但是，因为你不熟悉英文商务信函，所以你的选择的答案也不是最好的。
让行政部门做这件事，真是为难你们了！