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Question

帮我翻译一下歌词，谢谢
Yesterday I saw the sun shinin',
And the leaves were fallin' down softly,
My cold hands needed a warm, warm touch,
And I was thinkin' about you.

Here I am lookin' for signs of leaving,
You hold my hand, but do you really need me?
I guess it's time for me to let you go,
And I've been thinkin' about you,
I've been thinkin' about you.

When you sail across the ocean waters,
And you reach the other side safely,
Could you smile a little smile for me?
'cause I'll be thinkin' about you,
I'll be thinkin' about you,
I'll be thinkin' about you,
I'll be thinkin' about you.

Answer 1

Yesterday I saw the sun shinin',
昨天我看到眼光灿烂，
And the leaves were fallin' down softly,
还有树叶温柔的飘落。
My cold hands needed a warm, warm touch,
我冰冷的手需要一个暖和的触摸
And I was thinkin' about you.
我在想你

Here I am lookin' for signs of leaving,
这里我在找离去的讯号，
You hold my hand, but do you really need me?
你握着我的手，可是你真的需要我吗？
I guess it's time for me to let you go,
我想是该让你走的时候了
And I've been thinkin' about you,
我在想着你
I've been thinkin' about you.
我在想着你

When you sail across the ocean waters,
当你航行在海洋中，
And you reach the other side safely,
你安全的到达另一岸，
Could you smile a little smile for me?
你能给我一个小小的微笑吗？
'cause I'll be thinkin' about you
因为我将会想着你
I'll be thinkin' about you,
我将会想着你
I'll be thinkin' about you,
我将会想着你
I'll be thinkin' about you.
我将会想着你

Answer 2

我想问一下：你肯定你的这些英语有没有写错？