我造了一个英文句子，不知道对不对，哪位大神，帮忙看下，有错帮忙改一下，谢谢。

Question

I think that one might feel it better when he said that my son is excellent as a old father than when he said that my father is great as a son.

Answer 1

您想表达的意思是：我认为某人说他的儿子和老爸一样优秀比说我的父亲和孩子一样伟大要来的舒服。
似乎应该这样说：
I think that one might feel it better to say that my son is excellent as an old father than to say that my father is great as a son.

追问

我认为某人会感觉，说他的儿子很优秀当他作为一个父亲的时候比说我的父亲很伟大当他作为一个儿子的时候，好一些。

追答

恩，是的，刚才又仔细读了遍，感觉这是你想表达的意思。一开始我以为你是想用as ... as 结构然后漏掉了一个as。实际上这里是用as 当作为讲。上面的话就是你要的那个意思。