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请用英语为某校广播站写一则听英语讲座的广播通知
内容要点如下1时间5月15日下午3:30
2.地点学校礼堂
3.讲座内容美国的社会问题
4.主讲人刚访美归来的张杰老师
5.出席对象九年级全体学生
6.其他事项自拟
注意1,通知须包括所给内容要点但不要逐条译成英语
2第6要点的内容须用3,4句话展开合理想象作适当的发挥
3词数80字左右通知开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。
4参考词汇社会问题social problems 听讲座attend a lecture
There will be anEnglish attend a leature in our school on May 15th in 3:30p.m.We will talkabout the America's social problems.For our pleasure,Mr Zhang Jie will be takecharge of the leature.He had been to America not so long ago.All the grade 9 studentscan join the leature.Now,I have three more things to tell you.First,remember totake your notebook and pens so that you can mark the importantthings.Moreover,you can't take the food or drink in it.Last but not least,youmust listen to the teacher very carefully.Hope you will have a good day!
中考英语作文批改(15分为满分)
11。语法、时态出现了错误，还有要注意一般现在时表将来的用法；广播是不会直接进行通知的，主持人会在前面加几句话的。因为不知道你是哪个地区的，所以不好改，按我们这边中考只要语法单词不错误就能满分。
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