请英语大神帮忙看一下有没有语法错误，谢谢！
As is portrayed in the first picture, a young man is a fan of Beckham,who witted Beckham’s name on his face to show his love to Beckham. What’s more,some people even cost 300 Yuan to have a same heir with their idol. Those thought-provoking photos should arouse deep concern in our current society.
What are the reasons behind the trend? Some individuals point out that they see their idol as a hero which they should learn for. Now something similarly could happen in schoolboys. In a study that will appear in Journal of Society,the find that 67.6% of those surveyed said that: as a fans they always perches something about their idols. Over half of this students cost at least 300 Yuan a month to buy CD, T-shirt which have their idol’s name or photo on it and soon.
Hence, it is vital for us to take some effective actions. On the one hand, we should appeal to our governments and schools to educate citizens and children do not obsession idols. On the other hand, we should cultivate people’s sense that too much imitate idols will bring more harm than benefit.
第二段第二句，学习效仿是learn from不是learn for
还有这句看上去怪怪的
In a study that will appear in Journal of Society,the find that 67.6% of those surveyed said that: as a fans they always perches something about their idols.建议你把主句的will去掉
我也不算什么英语大神，建议先检查下我说的对不对再修改，还有建议LZ你阐述理由的时候可以用些别的词汇，最后一段里面有两个on the other hand，你大可以换些词比如besides，in addition，furthermore，moreover之类的，显得自己词汇量丰富
大神们帮我看看有没有错误?谢谢啦～
有语法错误，亲爱的，初中英语吧？让我来找找你的错误 1，英文的第一第二第三，用frist，second，third就可以了，能简便就简便，当然你后面要加LY也行，但是你要统一啊，第一你用的frist，后面却都加了ly，语法没错，但是不统一。可以改下 2，这句话有问题，改成这样，i'm sorry (that)you h...
请英语大神帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误,谢谢!
如果是的话，首先“纹身”要用'tattoo'，过去式是'tattooed'，它是及物动词，后加被纹身的对象；其次，强调的是“纹身”这一举动，所以语序应该是'As is portrayed in the first picture, a young man who is a fan of Beckham, tattooed his face with Beckham’s name to show his love to ...
我写的这个英语句子对吗,有没有什么语法错误?求各位大神看看
没有语法错误。但从语句上来说：可删去body，health即可；make改成help，make表示“让”，语气僵硬；habit是习惯的意思，A habit is something that you do often or regularly. 是经常做的事。建议换成性格personality或者character。满意请采纳，谢谢。
求各位英语大神们看看此文有无语法错误,如有请指出,感激不尽。
people always go to the market to buy something what they need （what改为“that”）apples,oranges,and something were soon sold out.People are always put on the new clothes in the Spring Festival.（something 改为 any other fruit ; were 改为will be; soon 移到sold out 后；删...
求英语大神帮忙看看这篇短文有没有语法错误,有的话在哪里,谢谢~~
仔细看了，基本没问题。唯一发现的一个小问题就是第二段第11行的那个that之前，不应该有逗号，或者你把它改成which吧。我记得引导定语从句的that之前不能加逗号。其它没问题。
帮忙看一下这段话有没有语法错误
第一句话有点啰嗦。可改为“there is a 13-year-old boy.第二句是想表达什么呢？是说他的名字没有一个人记得么，大家记得的是他的绰号？如果是这样，可改为“No one remembers his name.”因为recognize的意思是to know who sb is or what sth is when you see or hear them,because you ...
...高手帮忙看一下这篇作文(还有题目)有没有语法错误。谢谢
after a few day(s)复数加S wat not wonderful 应该是was，写错了
根据中文翻译成英文,请帮忙看一下是否有语法错误 ,谢谢!
你翻译的带着中式英语的弊端，多看看英语文章，多读，多写，多查，多记。好忧伤的程度 好 没表达出来，用SO，还有sad一般用来形容人，表示伤心难过，用词不准。天气在英语中一般用 It 代替，你这样写也不s算错，但要用比较级warmer.小 litter， 很 very 、 quite 闻 smell 食...
帮忙看一下有没有语法错误 如何翻译
Bath Flower Series Used for clean and massage Bathing is relaxing and enjoyable with it It is suitable for everyone to enjoy a better life 浴花系列用于清洁和按摩，用它洗澡后感觉轻松和享受，拥有它后每个人将过上更加美好的生活。
有英语大神帮我找一下这篇文章中的语法错误吗?
Wow，your English is excellent！You've expressed yourself really well！没有语法问题，也没有表达问题。两个笔误：They both are very good person —— persons Hope to see you soon at Ohio —— in Ohio 祝你美国求学愉快！
