帮忙翻译！！急用．．谢谢！

Question

I entered the room
Sat by your bed all through the night
I watched your daily fight
I hardly knew
The pain was almost more than I could bear
And still I hear
Your last words to me
Heaven is a place nearby
So I wont be so far away
And if you try and look for me
Maybe you will find me someday
Heaven is a place nearby
So there is no need to say goodbye
I wanna ask you not to cry
I will always be by your side
You just faded away
You spread your wings you had flown
Away to something unknown
Wish I could bring you back
You are always on my mind
About to tear myself apart.
You have your special place in my heart
Always heaven is a place nearby
So I wont be so far away
And if you try and look for me
Maybe you will find me someday
Heaven is a place nearby
So there is no need to say goodbye
I wanna ask you not to cry
I’ll always be by your side
And even when I go to sleep
I still can hear your voice
And those words
I never will forget
Heaven is a place nearby
So I wont be so far away
And if you try and look for me
Maybe you will find me someday
Heaven is a place nearby
So there is no need to say goodbye
I wanna ask you not to cry
I will always be by your side
还有个．．
麻烦翻译．

[03:16.72]you'd think on death no more.
[03:37.75]Then fare you well,
[03:39.99]sweet Cragie Hills, where often times
[03:44.80]I've roved,
[03:46.60]I never thought my childhood days
[03:50.60]I 'd part you any more,
[03:54.67]Now we;re sailing on the ocean
[03:59.18]for honour and promotion,
[04:03.74]And the bonny boats are sailing,
[04:08.22]way down by Doorin shore.

Answer 1

我进入房间
坐在你的床上整晚都
我看了你的每日扑灭
我几乎知道
痛得几乎比我更可以承受
还是我没有听到
你的最后一句话，给我
天堂是一个地方附近
所以我won't的那么遥远
而如果你尝试看看我
也许你会觉得我总有一天
天堂是一个地方附近
所以，没有必要说再见
我想请你不要哭，
我将永远为您服务
刚才你的视野中消失
你展开你的翅膀，你已经远走高飞
送走了一些不明
希望我能够为你带来回
你永远是我的心
关于撕毁自己除了。
您有特殊的地位，在我心中
总是天堂是一个地方附近
所以我won't的那么遥远
而如果你尝试看看我
也许你会觉得我总有一天
天堂是一个地方附近
所以，没有必要说再见
我想请你不要哭，
i ¯当地雇员总是由贵方
甚至当我去睡觉
我仍然能听到你的声音
与这些话
我绝不会忘记
天堂是一个地方附近
所以我won't的那么遥远
而如果你尝试看看我
也许你会觉得我总有一天
天堂是一个地方附近
所以，没有必要说再见
我想请你不要哭，
我将永远为您服务

[ 03:16.72 ] ：你想怎么就死无多。
[ 03:37.75 ] ，然后你车费，
[ 03:39.99 ]甜cragie山上，那里很多时候
[ 03:44.80 ]我已经roved ，
[ 03:46.60 ]我从来没有想到过我的童年天
[ 03:50.60 ]我' D零件，你的任何更
[ 03:54.67 ]现在我们;重新航行于大海
[ 03:59.18 ]为荣誉和推广，
[ 04:03.74 ]和邦尼船只航行，
[ 04:08.22 ]单程下跌doorin彼岸。

Answer 2

I entered the room我进入房间
Sat by your bed all through the night整夜坐在你的床边
I watched your daily fight我看到你每天战斗
I hardly knew我几乎不知道
The pain was almost more than I could bear那种疼痛是我无法承受
And still I hear我仍旧听到
Your last words to me你最后对我说的话
Heaven is a place nearby天堂就在身旁
So I wont be so far away所以我不会在遥远的地方
And if you try and look for me如果你努力想找到我
Maybe you will find me someday也许你会在某一天找到我
Heaven is a place nearby天堂就在身旁
So there is no need to say goodbye所以无需再说再见
I wanna ask you not to cry我想让你停止哭泣
I will always be by your side我会永远在你身旁
You just faded away你凋谢在远方
You spread your wings you had flown你展开翅膀飞翔
Away to something unknown飞向未知的地方
Wish I could bring you back希望能将你带回
You are always on my mind你永远在我心上
About to tear myself apart.几乎将我撕碎
You have your special place in my heart你在我心中占据了特殊的位置
Always heaven is a place nearby天堂就在身旁
So I wont be so far away所以我不会在遥远的地方
And if you try and look for me如果你努力想找到我
Maybe you will find me someday
Heaven is a place nearby
So there is no need to say goodbye
I wanna ask you not to cry
I’ll always be by your side
And even when I go to sleep及时我进入梦乡
I still can hear your voice我仍旧能听到你的声音
And those words那些话
I never will forget我永远不会忘记
Heaven is a place nearby
So I wont be so far away
And if you try and look for me
Maybe you will find me someday
Heaven is a place nearby
So there is no need to say goodbye
I wanna ask you not to cry
I will always be by your side
中间歌词又重复，没再翻

Answer 3

我进入房间
坐在你的床上整晚都
我看了你的每日扑灭
我几乎知道
痛得几乎比我更可以承受
还是我没有听到
你的最后一句话，给我
天堂是一个地方附近
所以我won't的那么遥远
而如果你尝试看看我
也许你会觉得我总有一天
天堂是一个地方附近
所以，没有必要说再见
我想请你不要哭，
我将永远为您服务
刚才你的视野中消失
你展开你的翅膀，你已经远走高飞
送走了一些不明
希望我能够为你带来回
你永远是我的心
关于撕毁自己除了。
您有特殊的地位，在我心中
总是天堂是一个地方附近
所以我won't的那么遥远
而如果你尝试看看我
也许你会觉得我总有一天
天堂是一个地方附近
所以，没有必要说再见
我想请你不要哭，
我将永远为您服务
甚至当我去睡觉
我仍然能听到你的声音
与这些话
我绝不会忘记
天堂是一个地方附近
所以我won't的那么遥远
而如果你尝试看看我
也许你会觉得我总有一天
天堂是一个地方附近
所以，没有必要说再见
我想请你不要哭，
我将永远为您服务
03 ：16.72]您在死亡没有会认为。
[03 ：37.75]然后车费很好您，
[03 ：39.99]甜Cragie小山，其中经常计时
[03 ：44.80]我徘徊了，
[03 ：46.60]我未曾认为我的童年天
[03 ：50.60]我再会分开您，
[03 ：54.67]现在我们; 在海洋的再航行 [03 ：59.18]荣誉和促进的，
[04 ：03.74]并且可爱小船航行，
[04 ：下来08.22]方式由Doorin岸。

Answer 4

楼主第一段英文是Lene Marlin一个挪威音乐奇才美少女的歌曲A Place Nearby,承袭来自斯堪地那维亚的流行乐创作力，以及拥有对美国大陆的词曲创作传统的高度了解，Lene Marlin于是非常地独树一格，与一般流行乐的偶像女歌手比较起来，是非常不同的。由于自己创作所有的音乐与歌词，Lene Marlin用一把空心吉他与她优美声音，传达了独有的音乐觉醒意识。这种自我的意识，有时甚至在成熟的歌者身上都还无法找到。她细致的观察力、与天真的童稚，都是使她更特别的个人特色。 下面是我自己的翻译,

我走进房间
整夜坐在你的床边
我目睹你每天每天挣扎
却不知道
原来你承受的痛苦远超过我想象
耳畔传来
你最后的话语

“所谓天堂就在身边
所以我也在不远的地方
如果你试试来寻找我
或许你会在某天找到我哦
所谓天堂就在身边
所以不需要说再见哦
我想让你不要哭泣啦
我会永远在你身边哦”

然后你就这样逝去了
展开双翅你高飞而去
飞向那未知的远方
多么希望我可以把你带回来
我永远把你铭记在心间
我感到自己就像被撕裂一样
你在我心中是如此特别的存在

“所谓天堂总在身边
所以我也在不远的地方
如果你试试来寻找我
或许你会在某天找到我哦
所谓天堂就在身边
所以不需要说再见哦
我想让你不要哭泣啦
我会永远在你身边哦”

就算我进入梦乡
我仍然可以听到你的声音
那美妙的声音
我从未淡忘

“所谓天堂就在身边
所以我也在不远的地方
如果你试试来寻找我
或许你会在某天找到我哦
所谓天堂就在身边
所以不需要说再见哦
我想让你不要哭泣啦
我会永远在你身边哦”

看完英文很是感动，就翻译了一下，所谓真正的英语水平大概就是可以用如此简单的词汇表达如此深沉真挚的情感吧，翻译的不是很好，我尽量的一句一句的符合原文翻译，其实如果去发挥一下会翻译的更好，见笑啦，请多多指教吧，有些地方难免要做一点点符合汉语语言习惯的更改。希望大家可以有更优秀的翻译。互相学习啦！

后面还有补充一下:
you'd think on death no more. 你将不会再想到死亡
Then fare you well,所以永别了吧，
sweet Cragie Hills,我可爱的克雷吉山峦，
where often times I've roved, 我曾漫游数次的地方
I never thought my childhood daysI 'd part you any more, 我以为从我孩童时期起就不会再和你分开
Now we;re sailing on the ocean for honour and promotion, 而如今我们却航行在荣誉和重生的海洋里
And the bonny boats are sailing,way down by Doorin shore. 沿着多里安海岸，美丽的船儿在航行

我想起来了,我应该看过这首诗歌,名字就是craigie hill全文如下:

craigie hill 克雷吉山峦

It being in the springtime and the small birds they were singing

那是在春天的时节，小鸟儿们在歌唱
Down by yon shady harbour I carelessly did stray

沿着远处婆娑的海港，我不经意间竟迷失了方向
The the thrushes they were warbling, The violets they were charming
画眉鸟柔和的唱着歌，还有那娇媚的紫罗兰竞相开放
To view fond lovers talking, a while I did delay
看着多情的恋人们低语，我停下了脚步
She said, my dear don′t leave me all for another season
她说，亲爱的请不要在任何季节离我而去
Though fortune does be pleasing I ′ll go along with you
虽然命运将我们捉弄，我还要与你在一起
I ′ll forsake friends and relations and bid this Irish nation
我会放弃亲友放弃爱尔兰民族的祝愿
And to the bonny Bann banks forever I ′ll bid adieu
我对神发誓，我永远都不会说再见
He said, my dear don′t grieve or yet annoy my patience
他说，亲爱的请不要悲伤,否则会困扰我的耐心
You know I love you dearly the more I′m going away
你要知道即使离开，我只会更强烈地爱你
I′m going to a foreign nation to purchase a plantation
我要去一个遥远的国度，去寻觅一片土地
To comfort us hereafter all in Amerika y
来抚平灾难给我们带来的所有创伤
Then after a short while a fortune does be pleasing
不久以后当一切都已经平息
T′will cause them for smile at our late going away
我将让所有人都因我们这次离别而幸福
We′ll be happy as Queen Victoria, all in her greatest glory
我们将像维多利亚女皇一样快乐，有着她最伟大的荣耀
We′ll be drinking wine and porter all in Amerika y
我们要在这废墟上品尝美酒佳肴
If you were in your bed lying and thinking on dying
如果你躺在床上正思考着死亡
The sight of the lovely Bann banks, your sorrow you′d give o′er
爱之神的目光，将你的忧伤带到我身旁
Or if were down one hour, down in yon shady bower
或许瞬间就会降临，降临在那幽暗的凉亭
Pleasure would surround you, you′d think on death no more
快乐将围绕着你，你将不会再想到死亡
Then fare you well, sweet Cragie Hills, where often times I′ve roved
所以永别了吧，我可爱的克雷吉山峦，我曾漫游数次的地方
I never thought my childhood days I ′d part you any more
我以为从我孩童时期起就不会再和你分开
Now we′re sailing on the ocean for honour and promotion
而如今我们却航行在荣誉和重生的海洋里
And the bonny boats are sailing, way down by Doorin shore
沿着多里安海岸，美丽的船儿在航行

Answer 5

I entered the room.我走进房间。
Sat by Ur bed all through the night.整夜坐在你床边。
I watched Ur daily fight.我看着你每天与病魔搏斗。
I hardly knew.我仅仅知道。
The pain was almost more than I could bear.那样的痛苦我所难以承受的。
And still I hear.我仍然能听见。
Ur last words 2 me.你给我的临终遗言
Heaven is a place nearby.天堂是一个很近的地方。
So I won't be so far away.所以我将离你不远。
And if U try & look 4 me.如果你尝试着寻找我。
Maybe U'll find me someday.也许某天你将会找到我。

Heaven is a place nearby.天堂是一个很近的地方。

So there's no need 2 say goodbye.所以没有必要说再见。
I wanna ask U not 2 cry.我想要告诫你不要哭泣。
I'll always be by Ur side ! 我将一直在你身边！

U just faded away.你还是逐渐衰弱下去。
U spread Ur wings U had flown.你已经展翅飞离。
Away 2 something unknown.离开我去到那未知的地方。
Wish I could bring U back.我希望能把你带回来。
U are always on my mind.我一直惦念着你。
About 2 tear myself apart.为我与你的分离去而哭泣。
U have Ur special place in my heart.你在我心中有特别的意义。
Always
heaven is a place nearby.天堂一直很近！
I'll always be by Ur side ! 我将一直在你身边！

And even when I go 2 sleep.即使我睡着了。
I still can hear Ur voice.我仍然能听到你的声音。
And those words.你的那些话语。
So I won't be so far away.所以我将离你不远。
I never will forget.我从未忘记。

Heaven is a place nearby.天堂是一个很近的地方。
So I won't be so far away.所以我将离你不远。
And if U try & look 4 me.如果你尝试着寻找我。
Maybe U'll find me someday.也许某天你将会找到我。
And if U try & look 4 me.如果你尝试着寻找我。
Maybe U'll find me someday.也许某天你将会找到我。
Heaven is a place nearby.天堂是一个很近的地方。
Heaven is a place nearby.天堂是一个很近的地方。
So there's no need 2 say goodbye.所以没有必要说再见。
I wanna ask U not 2 cry.我想要告诫你不要哭泣。
I'll always be by Ur side ! 我将一直在你身边！