请帮我修改一下英语作文中的错误，英语高手请入！
I will cover China in the following ways.
There are many nations in China. Every nation has the characteristic.
The Mongolian national minority people live the yurt, they by rough bold, honest warm is famous. They usually eat breast, meat, tea with milk. The entire sheep, the hand digs up the meat are alone nation characteristic.
The Dai nationality has a long history . The Dai nationality's Music, dance, folk songs are very fine. Water-Sprinkling Festival is the New Year holiday. People believe sprinkling water can indemnify each other blessings.
There are many things about nations of China. I can’t to be well rounded. But I believe my repot can make people be interested in nations of China. Then they can understand China further!
There are many nations in China. Every nation has different characteristic.
The Mongolian national minority people live in the yurt, they are famous for rough bold, honest warm. They usually eat bread, meat, tea with milk. The entire sheep and the hand digs up is their unique characteristics.
The Dai nationality has a long history . The Dai nationality's music, dance, folk songs are very nice. Water-Sprinkling Festival is their New Year's holiday. People believe in sprinkling water can bless them.
There are so many things about nations of China. I can’t tell you all about them. But I believe my report can attract many people's interest,and let them know more about china.
大致给你改了下，建议不要用中文思维来写英语作文，多注意语法~
求高手帮我修改英语作文的错误
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请高手帮忙改改我英语作文中的错误,谢谢!
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高手请进,帮我修改一下英语作文
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英语高手请进,帮忙修改一篇英语作文中的语法错误
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听高手帮我检查一下英语作文~!
and crabs.They can reach a maximum speed of 40 kilometres per hour.Dolphins are very kind to people and it is one of our best friends.It usually saves people from drowing.They can bring us amaze and happiness.So please value our friend---dolphin!写得很好，只是语法错误多。
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