这篇英语作文，帮我看下有没有语法错误，怎么改。注意：要语法错误，别看好不好
School uniform at school
In my opinion,we shouldn’t wear school uniform at school.Firstly,school uniforms are ugly.Most of us don’tlike wearing school uniforms.Secondly,school uniforms are unfortable.I can’t study well when I wear a school uniform.Lastly,school uniforms are expensive.A set of school uniform usually cost 150yuan.So,l think we shouldn’t wear school uniform at school.
这篇英语作文,帮我看下有没有语法错误,怎么改。注意:要语法错误,别看好...
没有语法错误，写得不错，就是第一句可以用so连接一下， Firstly,school uniforms are ugly so most of us don't like wearing shcool uniforms.
英语作文,帮我看看有没有什么语法错误?
您好！第一句话有点啰嗦，不应该这样讲，a student of our school，这有些过于中式英语了，你可以直接说I'm the monior of ...class .第二段At first，用的不是很恰当，这不是步骤。可以用：To start with，或者 From the beginning。最后一句话有语法错误，应该是Looking forward to you attend...
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误
没啥语法错误，就是第一句话看起来怪怪的，如果是我 会这样写：there are many ways to save(protect) our environment.后面没什么错，可以提几点建议：1.firstly, secondly等等这些，因为列的太多，所以不要列为好,列一般是有限的几条情况下用比较好，你可以直接用分号 就行。2.中间有很多小句子，...
我写的英语作文请帮我看下有没有语法错误请帮忙改正谢谢
Nowadays, more and more people prefer talking about on(去掉：on) dormitory life, because it plays（添加：a） significant role in our(最好去掉OUR，因为OUR和第一句的people逻辑上有点“冲突”，当然这个不是个大问题。直接写IN DAILY LIFE 就可以) daily life.It has caused substantial impa...
请帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有什么语法错误 如果有请帮忙改正,这是播...
语法没什么问题，不过我建议可以改改几个地方：1.“They say that the strong power”,say这个词语不是很规范，assume，believe,maintain等词更好。2.第二个moreover."Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation"感觉一篇文章里同时出现两次不太好。Furthermore或者what's more能避免重复...
英语初中作文,求帮忙挑下有没有语法错误,以及有没有什么话是可以删去的...
怎么说呢，错误很多，逻辑有问题 我随便帮你改一下一段 你自己体会一下 with the development of society , the communication becomes less and less among people. But showing a smiling face can be the best way to connect others and improve the situation.比如这一段，随着社会的发展，人与...
谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,谢谢,有错帮忙说下正确句子...
Xue Ting （to去掉） take it to you.At last , （I also say “） Happy birthday to you!（”）.Yours ,Wendy 大致改了，有的直接改，没括出来 建议，so also then but very have to没必要用那么多 不要那么多逗号，把句子连起来，说话简洁点 LZ年纪应该不大，写成这样不错了 ...
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
语法错误好像没有。但我可以指几点可以改的地方。1.He found that listening is more difficult .这句话，最好改成最高级，He found that listening is the most difficult.你本身句子并没有错误，但根据前后文，和其他2项做下比较，因为用最高级比较好点。2He couldn't understand every word。
我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好
第一，语法错误 prefer to + sth\/doing sth， 所以应该是 I prefer to joining in the English corner and watching English movies.参加活动，一般要加介词in，所以join in your activities for i will have less homework than that i have now.z这一句than前后结构一样，要用省略，所以改成for ...
求大神们帮我看看我这篇英语作文有没有语法错误。 The story mainly...
to study→of studying if time went back, I would cherish it much more.Nowadays这个词太大，常译作：当下，限时。你不过是小时候没好好听课而已，用不上这麼大的词。For example的内容可以放进“我发现好多难题”这句中去。……总之吧，你这里用词和语法错误可谓错漏百出，建议重写。
