高分求助帮忙翻译一段话

Question

1.负责全国地区策划开发推广及日常管理,人员招聘调整,市场监控及调整。根据公司目标制定策划实施总体策略及制定相应的市场渠道销售政策，市场推广活动及开发管理计划。指导组织属下员工进行多种手段，积极协调内外资源以实现销售，确保销售目标的完成和各办事处员工贯彻落实。
4. 严格执行公司的费用政策，做好销售费用和市场费用预算，了解各阶段的销售重点和市场开发的重点，确定费用使用方式，及时总结改进，提高资源使用的有效性。
5. 管理各区域内销售人员，建立、补充、发展、培养销售队伍，以满足区域业务长远发展的需要。
6. 审核区域内人员的系统工作表单，进行信息搜集分析，为市场销售决策整核数据。

Answer 1

1. Responsible for the national development and promotion of regional planning and daily management, staff recruitment adjustment, market supervision and adjustment. According to the company goal-setting plan to implement the overall strategy and to formulate appropriate marketing channels, marketing policies, marketing activities and development of management plans. To guide its staff in diverse ways to the organization, and actively coordinate internal and external resources to achieve sales, to ensure the completion of sales targets and the office staff to implement them.
4. The strict implementation of the company's expenses policy, do a good job selling expenses and marketing costs budget, understand the various stages of the sales focus and marketing focus to determine the cost of usage, and timely sum up improvements to enhance the effectiveness of the use of resources.
5. Management of sales personnel within the district to establish, supplement, development, and training sales force to meet the long-term development needs of regional operations.
6. Audit personnel system work within the region form of information collection, analysis, marketing decision-making for the entire nuclear data.

这是第二种翻译，看你要哪种了。
1. Responsible for the national development and promotion of regional planning and daily management, staff recruitment adjustment, market supervision and adjustment. According to the company goal-setting plan to implement the overall strategy and to formulate appropriate marketing channels, marketing policies, marketing activities and development of management plans. To guide its staff in diverse ways to the organization, and actively coordinate internal and external resources to achieve sales, to ensure the completion of sales targets and the office staff to implement them.
4. The strict implementation of the company's expenses policy, do a good job selling expenses and marketing costs budget, understand the various stages of the sales focus and marketing focus to determine the cost of usage, and timely sum up improvements to enhance the effectiveness of the use of resources.
5. Management of sales personnel within the district to establish, supplement, development, and training sales force to meet the long-term development needs of regional operations.
6. Audit personnel system work within the region form of information collection, analysis, marketing decision-making for the entire nuclear data.

Answer 2

楼上的翻译不错，但简历最好是简洁一点，多用短语。因为HR没那么多时间去细看
如：6. 审核区域内人员的系统工作表单，进行信息搜集分析，为市场销售决策整合数据。 可译为

6. Auditing worksheet, information collecting and analysing, data integration for the marketing decision.